for FILFY teacher9/8/2023 c13 
1JalPeregrine
Nice chapters! The scene changes are pretty fluid and mesh well together. Here there is a bit of a continuity error. How can Kokabiel use Excalibur Rapidly to close in with Harry if the blade exploded from Harry's previous attacks?
Other than that thus far, the battles scenes are nice! The feelings of each character being focused on is conveyed well.
1JalPeregrineNice chapters! The scene changes are pretty fluid and mesh well together. Here there is a bit of a continuity error. How can Kokabiel use Excalibur Rapidly to close in with Harry if the blade exploded from Harry's previous attacks?
Other than that thus far, the battles scenes are nice! The feelings of each character being focused on is conveyed well.
9/5/2023 c29 3WhiteElfElder
I get the feeling that what Germany is doing is still spurred by the forever Dark Lords, but even it if is not there is a major alternate reason they are going after Egypt where they know Harry is supposed to be now. I do not feel any sympathy if they do anything to anyone Harry cares for. I think the ICW are about to get themselves annihilated. With the amount of magic that would need to be thrown around by the ICW, natural disasters are going to start waking Gaea more than she is already.
I wonder if all of that extra magic could be funneled into creating a new void or pocket space for Ophis to inhabit and be locked away?
3WhiteElfElderI get the feeling that what Germany is doing is still spurred by the forever Dark Lords, but even it if is not there is a major alternate reason they are going after Egypt where they know Harry is supposed to be now. I do not feel any sympathy if they do anything to anyone Harry cares for. I think the ICW are about to get themselves annihilated. With the amount of magic that would need to be thrown around by the ICW, natural disasters are going to start waking Gaea more than she is already.
I wonder if all of that extra magic could be funneled into creating a new void or pocket space for Ophis to inhabit and be locked away?
9/3/2023 c29 50Shadesofpie
... so long for something so boring
... so long for something so boring
9/4/2023 c5 8Speaks with Spirits
I'm currently on chapter 5 of your story, and I'm finding it very hard to put down. Your story is extremely well written and very, very entertaining. Good job on the story, and I will continue to follow it as much as possible.
8Speaks with SpiritsI'm currently on chapter 5 of your story, and I'm finding it very hard to put down. Your story is extremely well written and very, very entertaining. Good job on the story, and I will continue to follow it as much as possible.
9/2/2023 c29 WearyCurmudgeon
I don't recall if Danaan was a natural world or one created by the Undertaking.
But if it were the latter, couldn't they tap into Earth's Magosphere to create other worlds for the varying other factions, thus decreasing the pressure on Gaia?
In a way it would give Cao Cao what he wants, but in a non-violent way, a world run just by humans. Course they wouldn't accept his rulership, but that's a separate issue.
Bit reminiscent of the Avalon Protocol in "Wizard's Fall" by the late "Bobmin356", where Harry and Co. created a pocket realm for themselves, while stripping the belligerent Magicals of their ability to spawn any more magical children. Thus causing the standard WW to die out.
Figuring that a thousand years of full separation might make the Mundane World more amenable to Magic (especially after the WW unknowingly nearly brought them to WW3).
I don't recall if Danaan was a natural world or one created by the Undertaking.
But if it were the latter, couldn't they tap into Earth's Magosphere to create other worlds for the varying other factions, thus decreasing the pressure on Gaia?
In a way it would give Cao Cao what he wants, but in a non-violent way, a world run just by humans. Course they wouldn't accept his rulership, but that's a separate issue.
Bit reminiscent of the Avalon Protocol in "Wizard's Fall" by the late "Bobmin356", where Harry and Co. created a pocket realm for themselves, while stripping the belligerent Magicals of their ability to spawn any more magical children. Thus causing the standard WW to die out.
Figuring that a thousand years of full separation might make the Mundane World more amenable to Magic (especially after the WW unknowingly nearly brought them to WW3).
9/4/2023 c29 tiran187
Yesss really happy this fic gets updated again!
And yeah wondering how the situation in Egypt will go, magic politicians being stupid and the magical in Egypt already working so closely w the muggles as well. Different factions going to help them.
that's probably just a pot of fireworks waiting to go off.
Yesss really happy this fic gets updated again!
And yeah wondering how the situation in Egypt will go, magic politicians being stupid and the magical in Egypt already working so closely w the muggles as well. Different factions going to help them.
that's probably just a pot of fireworks waiting to go off.
9/3/2023 c29 ulttoanova
I really enjoyed this chapter (after having reread the story to remember wtf was going on lol) and can't wait for the next chapter. I am extremely interested in the fact that Sirzech's peerage was decimated and that the Earth is breaking apart under all the magic. I look forward to Harry kicking the asses of the idiots coming to forcibly restore the Statute and I'm curious about his upcoming meeting with Shiva's faction. I don't have much else to say other than I absolutely can't wait to see the next update.
I really enjoyed this chapter (after having reread the story to remember wtf was going on lol) and can't wait for the next chapter. I am extremely interested in the fact that Sirzech's peerage was decimated and that the Earth is breaking apart under all the magic. I look forward to Harry kicking the asses of the idiots coming to forcibly restore the Statute and I'm curious about his upcoming meeting with Shiva's faction. I don't have much else to say other than I absolutely can't wait to see the next update.
9/1/2023 c29 Guest
well im still pissed that the two immortal Egyptians got away and of course the wizards are overreacting because what else is new. really wondering how this will play out considering the supernatural elements
well im still pissed that the two immortal Egyptians got away and of course the wizards are overreacting because what else is new. really wondering how this will play out considering the supernatural elements
9/3/2023 c29 insanecoop
Well, I won't lie, this was a rather disappointing chapter after so long.
10,000's of words about logistics?. Some smalls scenes of what is to come?.
It somehow felt like one massive filler chapter except it didn't seem to fill the gap between where it was and where it's going?
Well, I won't lie, this was a rather disappointing chapter after so long.
10,000's of words about logistics?. Some smalls scenes of what is to come?.
It somehow felt like one massive filler chapter except it didn't seem to fill the gap between where it was and where it's going?
9/2/2023 c29 James3reed
Entertaining, thank you.
You have a couple of continuity errors regarding the battle in/with Hades: Your description of Typhon changed from 10 heads/necks to hundreds. Your description of who died and when also changed (previous chapter Enku *almost* being killed...).
Entertaining, thank you.
You have a couple of continuity errors regarding the battle in/with Hades: Your description of Typhon changed from 10 heads/necks to hundreds. Your description of who died and when also changed (previous chapter Enku *almost* being killed...).