for Guardian Blue - Winter Hearth4/21/2020 c4 
6Denisore
Holy hell man! The fire, then the gifts...
This two chapters are so heavy...
Best holiday story I've read so far! Congrats and huge thanks!
6DenisoreHoly hell man! The fire, then the gifts...
This two chapters are so heavy...
Best holiday story I've read so far! Congrats and huge thanks!
3/21/2020 c5 3Medic 27
The story was excellent!
I'm not sure how to take the ending (or where I'll go to find out what happens)
3Medic 27The story was excellent!
I'm not sure how to take the ending (or where I'll go to find out what happens)
3/19/2020 c1 Medic 27
"Hey look! Fields!"
Up until the last line, I was thinking this was going to be a peaceful and fluff filled slice of life story. Shoulda known better. Lol I'm sure it will be great!
"Hey look! Fields!"
Up until the last line, I was thinking this was going to be a peaceful and fluff filled slice of life story. Shoulda known better. Lol I'm sure it will be great!
9/9/2019 c3 CrappyLighter
This was just a beautiful chapter and what a great moment with N&J at the end. 3
This was just a beautiful chapter and what a great moment with N&J at the end. 3
8/4/2018 c1 Guest
cielos que familia jaja
cielos que familia jaja
3/19/2018 c5 Guest
haaaa por que aveces no se si os matones tienen motivos pero si se que pueden ser horribles toda mi infancia fue dura con niños a los que nunca les hice nada supongo que por que no jugaba con ellos ya que de alguna manera les temía me pregunto por que aveces la gente trata diferentes a otros por no ser lo que quieren o lo que desean que sean en fin jamás es nada pero aún hoy desearía saber el por que en fin al menos para yudi salio bien y ahora en que enrredo se meteránhice
haaaa por que aveces no se si os matones tienen motivos pero si se que pueden ser horribles toda mi infancia fue dura con niños a los que nunca les hice nada supongo que por que no jugaba con ellos ya que de alguna manera les temía me pregunto por que aveces la gente trata diferentes a otros por no ser lo que quieren o lo que desean que sean en fin jamás es nada pero aún hoy desearía saber el por que en fin al menos para yudi salio bien y ahora en que enrredo se meteránhice
3/19/2018 c4 Guest
caray ese apodo seguira con yudi jaja
caray ese apodo seguira con yudi jaja
3/19/2018 c3 Guest
ajaja que osados son los conejos
ajaja que osados son los conejos
3/19/2018 c2 Guest
no no pueden tener vacaciones normmales buaaa
no no pueden tener vacaciones normmales buaaa
3/18/2018 c1 Guest
ajaja como es gusta jugar
ajaja como es gusta jugar
3/13/2018 c5 1Harkonnen28
That was another well done and emotional punch to the gut of a chapter. Lots of heavy stuff between Judy and Gideon and some great advice from Nick that transcends beyond the text on the screen.
That ending with Vivienne though... Oh man, that is a janga in the making right there. My first thought when she mentioned getting a PI, was Finnick. Then as she went on, I was like... No... She didn’t... She didn’t just send Sharla to Honey. Then Ha! I almost feel sorry for Sharla. Almost.
Great work as usual!
1Harkonnen28That was another well done and emotional punch to the gut of a chapter. Lots of heavy stuff between Judy and Gideon and some great advice from Nick that transcends beyond the text on the screen.
That ending with Vivienne though... Oh man, that is a janga in the making right there. My first thought when she mentioned getting a PI, was Finnick. Then as she went on, I was like... No... She didn’t... She didn’t just send Sharla to Honey. Then Ha! I almost feel sorry for Sharla. Almost.
Great work as usual!
3/12/2018 c4 Harkonnen28
Wow... those were some incredibly thoughtful gifts. I love how you always bring things back into the story from the past to create moments like this.
Also, I can totally see Nick being one of those individuals that would methodically prune the Blueberry bush like one of those Bonsai trees. Hehe.
Wow... those were some incredibly thoughtful gifts. I love how you always bring things back into the story from the past to create moments like this.
Also, I can totally see Nick being one of those individuals that would methodically prune the Blueberry bush like one of those Bonsai trees. Hehe.
3/12/2018 c3 Harkonnen28
This chapter turned out to be a whole lot more emotional than I expected. That was some damn good writing there.
It’s a good thing that the fuel Judy added to the fire was in a metaphysical sense or else that fire would burn for a long time. Now though, her own world can become a better place.
The point counter-point session with the reporter was excellent as well. That oh so terrifying fox wit on display once again.
Great stuff, Sarsis!
This chapter turned out to be a whole lot more emotional than I expected. That was some damn good writing there.
It’s a good thing that the fuel Judy added to the fire was in a metaphysical sense or else that fire would burn for a long time. Now though, her own world can become a better place.
The point counter-point session with the reporter was excellent as well. That oh so terrifying fox wit on display once again.
Great stuff, Sarsis!