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7/5 c37 5Draconis678
This was an absolutely amazing story. This is honestly one of my favorite fics, and I've read alot. I almost cried when Heinrich was forced to kill Black Alice, or as you have named her. Mary. I accept this fic as MGQ canon. Would you mind if I used elements from your fic in my own story which involves both Heinrich and Black Alice?
6/3/2020 c11 3The-4uditor
Sylph be like that guy in youtube who said that steel is heavier than the feathers
2/27/2020 c37 Guest
Other than the fact that the Lilith sisters seemed to be forgotten even in the True End/Chapt 37, fantastic work!
11/11/2019 c37 6OuroboroS9
The plot felt a bit rushed in the last chapters, but it was still a fun story to read. Thanks for the good work.
10/2/2019 c36 31NeoScriptGenius12
Lucifina killing Heinirch was a great twist, but IIRC in canon Heinrich died because he eroded himself to death from overuse of AH and from basically showering himself in Angel blood.
8/15/2019 c37 jellyjace
What an amazing ride! i just played paradox recently and i stumbled upon this while reading comments from the wiki.
7/26/2019 c37 Jupiter's Bull
Wow, what an amazing ending. This story is clearly the best MGQ story on this site. You truly did a remarkable job with the worldbuilding, with the characters, and with the lore. This has been an amazing journey and I am both sad and happy we are at the end. I'm sad because I loved reading this story and following the amazing journey you were writing. But I'm happy that we got such an amazing conclusion.

Congratulations in finishing the story. It was a wonderful ride all the way through, and I'll be sure to come back to it as I go through Paradox part 3, whenever that's coming out and whenever it gets translated. Anyways, great job, and I can't wait to read more of your works. This has been a great journey, and I really love this story!
7/24/2019 c37 Rathilal
Perhaps a little late on the draw, but I'd like to thank you for your work and congratulate you on completing it.

Ever since I saw Alicetroemeria in Paradox I wanted to hopefully learn more about Heinrich's journey outside of the basics, and this was a very effective fic at playing around with the unknowns while keeping to canon. I even forgot Dinah as a character existed (well, was mentioned) until this story.

I'm also especially glad you wrote two endings. While I did mostly want to ensure the story was wrapped up pertaining to canon (I must admit, I was hoping to see more of Lucifina's famous childish sadism), having a happy ending after growing to love both Alice and Heinrich's characters was something I needed.

So good job. Hope to see more written works from you in the future.
7/14/2019 c37 gaming iguana
holy crap what a fantastic end, I've been reading this story since it was first created and it has really come so far in the last two years.
7/15/2019 c37 4HollowKingCero
*claps* Great story.
7/14/2019 c37 Boundary of Emptiness
One of the best serious MGQ stories on the internet. You definitely deserve praise and a long break; writing 242K words in a year and a half is admirable. I wish I could update as consistently as you.
7/14/2019 c37 12Commander Dagoth Boreale
Well, it's been one hell of a time reading this as the years passed by. I have to say, this is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and it's been exciting and intriguing to see how you handled this part of MGQ's history, as well as how you wrote out the interactions and scenes the cast, both the original and the OCs, would have with each other. It's been a pleasure to have read this story with both its canon and happy endings! This was certainly a story that was worth reading and waiting eagerly for, if not one of the best MGQ stories ever written. And, feel free to take a break from writing- You certainly deserve one after writing something as great as this. Until next time!
7/8/2019 c36 4HollowKingCero
Making me hate Ilias even more lol
6/30/2019 c34 Magicannon
Just read this from start to end, and I have to say that this story is fantastic! This is probably the best Monmusu Quest story I’ve read, with only ‘Monster Girl Saga’ by GenocideHeart coming close. You definitely deserve more readers.
6/24/2019 c33 HollowKingCero
I can feel it coming... The Final Battle is over the horizon!
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