for Lost Stars5/22/2018 c3 Guest
hey, i really like your writing and i love how the story is going so far, but sometimes i get really confused because there's a lot of metaphors and it can be too descriptive. if that's your style of writing, i completely understand, but i was just wondering if you use less metaphors in your writing.
i'm sorry if this comes off as me being rude, i don't intend to offend you in anyway, it just makes it hard for me to follow sometimes.
hey, i really like your writing and i love how the story is going so far, but sometimes i get really confused because there's a lot of metaphors and it can be too descriptive. if that's your style of writing, i completely understand, but i was just wondering if you use less metaphors in your writing.
i'm sorry if this comes off as me being rude, i don't intend to offend you in anyway, it just makes it hard for me to follow sometimes.
5/20/2018 c3 
1BeanboozledFoxyMama
ugh. I hate it. I hate how good you write. ;-;
man, I need to have writing classes alongside the spanish ones with you.
I read your story thrice. The way you write is so... smooth. Like you don't use bombastic words that makes the reader google half the story. You write so simply, its beautiful. No kidding. Your words are poetic and everything feels so breezy, like I am floating. And the way you describe even the smallest things as if the entire story is playing in front of our eyes with every minute detail. Its colourful. Your writing and your story has life.
1BeanboozledFoxyMamaugh. I hate it. I hate how good you write. ;-;
man, I need to have writing classes alongside the spanish ones with you.
I read your story thrice. The way you write is so... smooth. Like you don't use bombastic words that makes the reader google half the story. You write so simply, its beautiful. No kidding. Your words are poetic and everything feels so breezy, like I am floating. And the way you describe even the smallest things as if the entire story is playing in front of our eyes with every minute detail. Its colourful. Your writing and your story has life.
5/18/2018 c3 6HidingBehindMyWords
Oh hey! I’m in your authors note! That makes me feel cool.
You already have a lot of my thoughts on the chapter, but I still felt the need to tell you I love it and am excited for the next! Especially since you know my impatient butt is over eager for them to interact again lol.
6HidingBehindMyWordsOh hey! I’m in your authors note! That makes me feel cool.
You already have a lot of my thoughts on the chapter, but I still felt the need to tell you I love it and am excited for the next! Especially since you know my impatient butt is over eager for them to interact again lol.
3/31/2018 c2 1BeanboozledFoxyMama
Damn girl. You write so well. I can't even imagine writing that well. I will wait for your updates. You'd better build up your typing skills, I am not very patient. XD The story is really good.
1BeanboozledFoxyMamaDamn girl. You write so well. I can't even imagine writing that well. I will wait for your updates. You'd better build up your typing skills, I am not very patient. XD The story is really good.
1/19/2018 c2 heademptyonlydraco
I'm sorry but can you simplify what happened in this chapter, it's kinda confusing.
I'm sorry but can you simplify what happened in this chapter, it's kinda confusing.
1/19/2018 c2 6HidingBehindMyWords
I’m so happy you updated this!
It’s interesting that Clary doesn’t get along with her brother. I was wondering how Jonathan Morgenstern was going to be in this story! I’m curious to see if they get any closer as they get older or if they remain sort of at odds.
Lol at the “fancy” line breaks
I know I mentioned that I loved Clary’s thought process in the last chapter, but it’s true again here! Her thinking of the creaky door as a snitch that was tattling on her was great. :)
Yay for baby Izzy & Alec! You can just tell that Iz is going to be a force to be reckoned with when she grows up.
I was a little confused during the “action sequence” with the soldiers, but I think I get the general idea of it. I understood that Jace and Clary got away, anyway. When can I look forward to Clary referring to him as Jace instead of Jonathan, by the way? It’s so weird calling him that lol (though I understand why he’s being referenced that way).
In any case, you’re too hard on yourself and this was another wonderful chapter. I can’t wait to see what you write for the next one. :)
6HidingBehindMyWordsI’m so happy you updated this!
It’s interesting that Clary doesn’t get along with her brother. I was wondering how Jonathan Morgenstern was going to be in this story! I’m curious to see if they get any closer as they get older or if they remain sort of at odds.
Lol at the “fancy” line breaks
I know I mentioned that I loved Clary’s thought process in the last chapter, but it’s true again here! Her thinking of the creaky door as a snitch that was tattling on her was great. :)
Yay for baby Izzy & Alec! You can just tell that Iz is going to be a force to be reckoned with when she grows up.
I was a little confused during the “action sequence” with the soldiers, but I think I get the general idea of it. I understood that Jace and Clary got away, anyway. When can I look forward to Clary referring to him as Jace instead of Jonathan, by the way? It’s so weird calling him that lol (though I understand why he’s being referenced that way).
In any case, you’re too hard on yourself and this was another wonderful chapter. I can’t wait to see what you write for the next one. :)
1/7/2018 c1 OMG
Update soon please! This is so good and I really want Clace to kiss! Happy New Year's! Keep writing!
Update soon please! This is so good and I really want Clace to kiss! Happy New Year's! Keep writing!
1/1/2018 c1 Thistownneedsanenema
I'm not on this site much, evidently, heh, but I've read my fair share. And, can I say, this is really good! It's written SO well! I can not wait for Clace to develop and all, because I feel like you're going to make it so epic! I'm looking for those lemons too lol. Update soon and happy new year!
I'm not on this site much, evidently, heh, but I've read my fair share. And, can I say, this is really good! It's written SO well! I can not wait for Clace to develop and all, because I feel like you're going to make it so epic! I'm looking for those lemons too lol. Update soon and happy new year!
1/1/2018 c1 1popie312
So... I don't usually write reviews. For anything. Actually, this is the first one I've written. I just thought that it's completely unfair that you only have 1 review when this is such a beautifully well written story. I just want to say that I love this, and I hope to see more. Thank you for writing this!
1popie312So... I don't usually write reviews. For anything. Actually, this is the first one I've written. I just thought that it's completely unfair that you only have 1 review when this is such a beautifully well written story. I just want to say that I love this, and I hope to see more. Thank you for writing this!
12/29/2017 c1 6HidingBehindMyWords
I’m in hour A/N?! :D I feel so special lol.
This was FANTASTIC! *deep breath*
Brace yourself, because I’m about to ramble at you! (Who’s shocked? No one? Sounds right...)
First off, your descriptors in the story are amazing! You have this very fantastical writing style that flows so beautifully and I think it’s going to make this story epic.
The first paragraph alone really draws you in and you are SO good at describing the surroundings (which, I’m jealous. I’m terrible at that) that the reader can really feel like they’re there.
Clary sounds like she looks like this precious, little doll that I want to keep forever, but her spirited attitude makes her even cuter.
The logic of not crying to cause more chaos and beginning to walk instead is so smartI can’t wait to see her mature into an adult, because I’m sure she will be absolutely brilliant.
ClaryJace’s meeting was so cute! Their dialogue was so perfectly innocent and reminiscent of childhood. Really, it was just on point.
“His mother was the best girl ever.” OKAY, CHILD JACE. JUST MAKE MY HEART MELT, THAT’S COOL.
Clary’s indignation over being lied to by her parents...again, so precocious. I am REALLY lookin forward to adult!Clary
Jace stumbling over her last name and then trying to hide his embarrassment by saying it was weird. How do you have him so perfectly in character as a small child? This is amazing.
There’s not enough caps lock and exclamation points to describe how excited I am for this story.
Thank you for writing the Romeo-Juliet-esque fanfic Clace deserves!
6HidingBehindMyWordsI’m in hour A/N?! :D I feel so special lol.
This was FANTASTIC! *deep breath*
Brace yourself, because I’m about to ramble at you! (Who’s shocked? No one? Sounds right...)
First off, your descriptors in the story are amazing! You have this very fantastical writing style that flows so beautifully and I think it’s going to make this story epic.
The first paragraph alone really draws you in and you are SO good at describing the surroundings (which, I’m jealous. I’m terrible at that) that the reader can really feel like they’re there.
Clary sounds like she looks like this precious, little doll that I want to keep forever, but her spirited attitude makes her even cuter.
The logic of not crying to cause more chaos and beginning to walk instead is so smartI can’t wait to see her mature into an adult, because I’m sure she will be absolutely brilliant.
ClaryJace’s meeting was so cute! Their dialogue was so perfectly innocent and reminiscent of childhood. Really, it was just on point.
“His mother was the best girl ever.” OKAY, CHILD JACE. JUST MAKE MY HEART MELT, THAT’S COOL.
Clary’s indignation over being lied to by her parents...again, so precocious. I am REALLY lookin forward to adult!Clary
Jace stumbling over her last name and then trying to hide his embarrassment by saying it was weird. How do you have him so perfectly in character as a small child? This is amazing.
There’s not enough caps lock and exclamation points to describe how excited I am for this story.
Thank you for writing the Romeo-Juliet-esque fanfic Clace deserves!