for Greg Veder vs The World1/1/2024 c94 Julie Q
"some random thug literally seconds away from committing an execution on two parents in front of their young son for some cash"
- this is pure genius. Greg just saved his universe's versions of Thomas and Martha Wayne from getting gunned down in front of Earth-Bet's version of Bruce, a.k.a. the future Batman! :) So awesome.
...sooooo, does this mean that Bruce just got inspired to become the world's leading vigilante / superhero of the Badass Normal variety by Greg Veder? Because that would be brilliant on so many levels... ;)
Sending you cuddles and kisses,
And all the best wishes,
- Julie ;) xoxox
"some random thug literally seconds away from committing an execution on two parents in front of their young son for some cash"
- this is pure genius. Greg just saved his universe's versions of Thomas and Martha Wayne from getting gunned down in front of Earth-Bet's version of Bruce, a.k.a. the future Batman! :) So awesome.
...sooooo, does this mean that Bruce just got inspired to become the world's leading vigilante / superhero of the Badass Normal variety by Greg Veder? Because that would be brilliant on so many levels... ;)
Sending you cuddles and kisses,
And all the best wishes,
- Julie ;) xoxox
1/1/2024 c119 Julie Q
Just a small request - when you started this magnificent epic saga, you always included what day of the week it was with the dates? Pretty pretty please could you start doing that again? It was so helpful, and since you stopped including them, it's a bit tricky scrolling back through to calculate what day of the week it is now.
Thank you! :) *hugs*
Sending you cuddles and kisses,
And all the best wishes,
- Julie ;) xoxox
Just a small request - when you started this magnificent epic saga, you always included what day of the week it was with the dates? Pretty pretty please could you start doing that again? It was so helpful, and since you stopped including them, it's a bit tricky scrolling back through to calculate what day of the week it is now.
Thank you! :) *hugs*
Sending you cuddles and kisses,
And all the best wishes,
- Julie ;) xoxox
1/1/2024 c42 Julie Q
...wow.
Reading this chapter for the first time left me in a state of awe at how magnificent this fight scene is! :) *hugs* When I reached the end, I just sat there for ten minutes or so gaping and grinning at the screen - then I snapped out of it and read the chapter again from the top! You, my dearest ZFighter18, are a total screaming genius. *hugs*
Sending you cuddles and kisses,
And all the best wishes,
- Julie ;) xoxox
...wow.
Reading this chapter for the first time left me in a state of awe at how magnificent this fight scene is! :) *hugs* When I reached the end, I just sat there for ten minutes or so gaping and grinning at the screen - then I snapped out of it and read the chapter again from the top! You, my dearest ZFighter18, are a total screaming genius. *hugs*
Sending you cuddles and kisses,
And all the best wishes,
- Julie ;) xoxox
12/21/2023 c124 
1Bag of Holding
Surprised he hasnt tried to start a party at all and also that he hasnt questioned questionmarks in weird places like how the undersiders have and how similar certain summaries are.
1Bag of HoldingSurprised he hasnt tried to start a party at all and also that he hasnt questioned questionmarks in weird places like how the undersiders have and how similar certain summaries are.
12/15/2023 c63 arentschmidt
Holy Mother Of God! Wow. Oh... wow. I.. this is my first review. And.. damn. That about sums it up.
Holy Mother Of God! Wow. Oh... wow. I.. this is my first review. And.. damn. That about sums it up.
12/6/2023 c124 1Phobophobophobia
It seemed like you were really going somewhere there, only for the most anticlimactic ending I have ever seen. He got punched in the face once and that's it? I could see him not remembering Trickster's power, but you've already established that he's stupid fast. And don't say it's because he wants to keep his identities separate, you've already established that he doesn't hold back when his loved ones are in danger.
1PhobophobophobiaIt seemed like you were really going somewhere there, only for the most anticlimactic ending I have ever seen. He got punched in the face once and that's it? I could see him not remembering Trickster's power, but you've already established that he's stupid fast. And don't say it's because he wants to keep his identities separate, you've already established that he doesn't hold back when his loved ones are in danger.
12/3/2023 c84 Llewey
I have literally no idea why the mom got upset when he gave her breakfast in bed beyond waking up to him in her room
I have literally no idea why the mom got upset when he gave her breakfast in bed beyond waking up to him in her room
11/30/2023 c124 Ren Shiroi
Was really enjoying this last two chapters, but that ending was anticlimactic as shit. Oh well, looking forward to the next chapter.
Was really enjoying this last two chapters, but that ending was anticlimactic as shit. Oh well, looking forward to the next chapter.
11/27/2023 c124 Guest
Peak fiction
Peak fiction
11/28/2023 c12 Aliid
I'm sorry, why does nobody talk about how STUPID the plot of this chapter is? It entirely depended on an impossibility that shouldn't happen, which is the stupidly named debuff. He has gamers mind which explicitly stated that it protects him from mental debuffs, but it didn't, which only means that it depends entirely on plot to function, which fills me with dread going forward. Honestly, the story was quite good until chapter 12.
I'm sorry, why does nobody talk about how STUPID the plot of this chapter is? It entirely depended on an impossibility that shouldn't happen, which is the stupidly named debuff. He has gamers mind which explicitly stated that it protects him from mental debuffs, but it didn't, which only means that it depends entirely on plot to function, which fills me with dread going forward. Honestly, the story was quite good until chapter 12.
11/27/2023 c124 TrumpasaurusRex
The MC continues to make mistake after mistake. You think you’d see some character growth. But no.
Same old same old.
The MC continues to make mistake after mistake. You think you’d see some character growth. But no.
Same old same old.