for Greg Veder vs The World1/8/2018 c9 bookcoda
Seems pretty good so far the writing is decent and i don't see any problems keep it up.
Seems pretty good so far the writing is decent and i don't see any problems keep it up.
1/8/2018 c9 Ronel Templo
...uuuuuugghfggh*more sounds u make in the mornin' or something* make it longer
...uuuuuugghfggh*more sounds u make in the mornin' or something* make it longer
1/7/2018 c8 Tehb'Ineh
And so our protagonist Greg Veder shows us how he can be the intersection on the Venn diagram of awesome, and lame, regarding his capabilities and social standing respectively. P. S. The Mr Miyagi line was fantastic.
And so our protagonist Greg Veder shows us how he can be the intersection on the Venn diagram of awesome, and lame, regarding his capabilities and social standing respectively. P. S. The Mr Miyagi line was fantastic.
1/5/2018 c7 MysteriousGuyWithAMoustache
I was fine with the 50% bonus. I remember thinking it was done incorrectly but that, like Dante's inferno, is a long lost memory. Either way, I'm enjoying it~
I was fine with the 50% bonus. I remember thinking it was done incorrectly but that, like Dante's inferno, is a long lost memory. Either way, I'm enjoying it~
1/5/2018 c7 Tehb'Ineh
His point about it being a fanfiction is hilarious, thanks for the read so far.
His point about it being a fanfiction is hilarious, thanks for the read so far.
1/5/2018 c7 
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That's some heavy bullshitting right there. Hey ya he's going to forget his homework again XD. Out of curiosity can he combine observation and bullshitting to get like the perfect bullshitting or negotiating skill or a bullshit detector?
55dgj212That's some heavy bullshitting right there. Hey ya he's going to forget his homework again XD. Out of curiosity can he combine observation and bullshitting to get like the perfect bullshitting or negotiating skill or a bullshit detector?
1/4/2018 c6 Edale
Greg just too a fair amount of damage, so why in the stats at the end of the chapter is his HP listed as full?
Greg just too a fair amount of damage, so why in the stats at the end of the chapter is his HP listed as full?
1/4/2018 c5 serus black antihumannature
good work hope for more but dosent greag know hes a cape i mean hes no opseced with it but parahumans are comon knowale like the earth revoled around the soon but i sapost it the low wis stat
good work hope for more but dosent greag know hes a cape i mean hes no opseced with it but parahumans are comon knowale like the earth revoled around the soon but i sapost it the low wis stat
1/3/2018 c5 Ronel Templo
Boi,first time in a call out...*kid danger impersonation*feels gooood. Oh also can u give him an ability from another world. PM me for power ideas
Boi,first time in a call out...*kid danger impersonation*feels gooood. Oh also can u give him an ability from another world. PM me for power ideas