for Greg Veder vs The World9/18/2024 c138 marcmanalili132
yeah, dropping this fic. the story is getting jumbled up as it goes on.
yeah, dropping this fic. the story is getting jumbled up as it goes on.
9/8/2024 c1 Ddraigspiderarc609
It feels like the story is getting away from you. Too many plot threads have been introduced so far while so many haven’t been fully tied up. The story seems like its meandering and losing focus.
It feels like the story is getting away from you. Too many plot threads have been introduced so far while so many haven’t been fully tied up. The story seems like its meandering and losing focus.
19/3/2024 c132 ironhair
E̵̛̹̟̜͓̪̾͊̑̂͋͛̿͆͌̌͆̌̐̏̅̀͂͊̍͘͝͝͝͝͝Ȩ̵͙͍̗̤̱͕̣̤̩͓̞͚̰̫̲͇͈̠̘͔́̿͛̅̔͌̐̍́͌̑̾͋̽̀̽̊͘͘͜͠ͅ ̷̡̢͚̼͉̳̖̲̤̺̦̣̼͖͉͈͙̓̎͒͘͜ͅİ̵̧̨̢̛̮̹͇̼̘͓̙̺̺̪̦͑̃́̑̏̋͊̉̓͑̀̏͘͜͝͠T̵̛̬͓͈̺̻͉̙̂͒͑̓͐͠ ̶̛̛̛̛̣̜́̄̇͋͐͌̑̔̓̋͊̂̔̍̚̕͘͠͝ͅĄ̶̛̠̼̘͚̮͉̲̼̫̥͔̲̯͎̼̞͖̙͉̲͕̗L̷̢̢̦̣̲̦̩̜̻͍̼̥̞̻̦͎͚͈̪̒́͂̏̇̽̊̏̉̚͝͠L̴̛̫͖͙̞̠͎̘͇̰̖̮͈̻̹̮̼̩̗͓̠͈̲̅́̋̅͛̐̋̈́̀̐̅͆̿̽̃̋̈́́͜͠͝͠͝ͅ!̶̲̳͐̅̈́̿̈́̀"̸̧̳̳̤̳̭̖̦͖̳͉̲̤͎͇̲͎͎̫̱̳̼̦̍̒̽́̄͌͊̏̎ͅ
What was seen?
E̵̛̹̟̜͓̪̾͊̑̂͋͛̿͆͌̌͆̌̐̏̅̀͂͊̍͘͝͝͝͝͝Ȩ̵͙͍̗̤̱͕̣̤̩͓̞͚̰̫̲͇͈̠̘͔́̿͛̅̔͌̐̍́͌̑̾͋̽̀̽̊͘͘͜͠ͅ ̷̡̢͚̼͉̳̖̲̤̺̦̣̼͖͉͈͙̓̎͒͘͜ͅİ̵̧̨̢̛̮̹͇̼̘͓̙̺̺̪̦͑̃́̑̏̋͊̉̓͑̀̏͘͜͝͠T̵̛̬͓͈̺̻͉̙̂͒͑̓͐͠ ̶̛̛̛̛̣̜́̄̇͋͐͌̑̔̓̋͊̂̔̍̚̕͘͠͝ͅĄ̶̛̠̼̘͚̮͉̲̼̫̥͔̲̯͎̼̞͖̙͉̲͕̗L̷̢̢̦̣̲̦̩̜̻͍̼̥̞̻̦͎͚͈̪̒́͂̏̇̽̊̏̉̚͝͠L̴̛̫͖͙̞̠͎̘͇̰̖̮͈̻̹̮̼̩̗͓̠͈̲̅́̋̅͛̐̋̈́̀̐̅͆̿̽̃̋̈́́͜͠͝͠͝ͅ!̶̲̳͐̅̈́̿̈́̀"̸̧̳̳̤̳̭̖̦͖̳͉̲̤͎͇̲͎͎̫̱̳̼̦̍̒̽́̄͌͊̏̎ͅ
What was seen?
9/3/2024 c122 ironhair
Wouldn't that instantly mean failure of the bonus condition, with Theo being in the bathroom?
Wouldn't that instantly mean failure of the bonus condition, with Theo being in the bathroom?