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10/3 c52 C.M.Alm
see you beyond the Rim Londo Mollari, may you find peace
4/8 c50 Julie
Beautifully crafted. A truly engrossing story. Well done. I loved the hillside of flowers. I hope if you ever write a book, that I find it to buy. You are very talented.
1/9 c50 1Black Puma
Loved this Story and followd it from the beginning. Great work.
12/31/2019 c49 17Mellia Bee
Whoa whoa whoa, wait, what? We’re that close to the final chapter? Aww, Londo, don’t do anything foolish (for once in your life!) You and Timov need to be happy together!

This chapter was excellent as always. I love the way Vir is going against old ways to stop the feud by not continuing it. Smart boy. I also liked the conversation between Vir and Londo about marrying again. It helped tie some canon things together without ignoring his deep affection for Senna, which I appreciated. Thanks for writing and sharing this! I know I’m a relative newcomer to this story, but I will miss it when it’s done.
12/8/2019 c48 Mellia Bee
Ohhh, I’m so sad. Senna!

But the chapter was beautifully and thoughtfully written as always. And the last paragraph was terribly amusing. I could practically hear Vir sputtering in complete shock at his appointment! :)
11/24/2019 c47 Mellia Bee
Oh no, no, no, don’t let anything happen rob Senna! Things were going so well!

I like the way you’re portraying Londo and Timov’s relationship. It’s honestly kind of sweet that they get a second chance after everything. And I like his decision regarding the crown. It’s time for him to finally take some time out of the limelight. (If that is possible given his miracle status now!) :)

Thanks again for writing this!
11/9/2019 c46 Mellia Bee
Oh wow. That was extremely satisfying. I want them to have a happy endingggg! Confusion upon Toscanelli and his ilk, and destruction to the thing in hyperspace.

This really is a very well-written story. I hope you know how much we appreciate you. Well done!
11/1/2019 c45 Mellia Bee
Wow. Wow, this has been a journey. For two nights in a row I’ve stayed up long, long past any sensible hour to keep reading this. You weave together the pieces of the puzzle that B5 left us, and did so masterfully. I have read exactly 1 B5 novelization in my life, and this was leagues better than that. You do a fantastic job with characterization, foreshadowing, finding and exploiting canon loopholes, and writing OCs that are so real I forget they weren’t on the show too. This is the best B5 fanfic I’ve ever found, and I’m delighted I got the chance to read it. The machine’s use for justice and a sort of deus ex machina in this chapter was very fitting, and I find myself quite charmed by the ending.

Thank you for all your hard work and planning that went into this. I look forward to the upcoming chapters!
11/1/2019 c1 Mellia Bee
I read this first chapter a couple months ago, and actually completely forgot it, so I hopped back to read it as per your note on chapter 44. Wow - so that’s what the oracle meant!
11/1/2019 c44 Mellia Bee
You’re kidding. Canon G’Kar actually has GILLS? You - you’re brilliant to use that for this. Absolutely brilliant.
11/1/2019 c43 Mellia Bee
Fascinating name trivia! And lovely to have a little ray of sunshine. Heart aching for the Slave Captain though.
11/1/2019 c42 Mellia Bee
Yay Timov! She’s the best, and her speech was very touching. Also, I am super impressed at your foreshadowing of this chapter way back when.
11/1/2019 c41 Mellia Bee
Knew this was coming, but it’s rather shocking to actually reach it. But dare I hope again for our Narn?
11/1/2019 c40 Mellia Bee
I am continually in awe at how you weave this story.
11/1/2019 c39 Mellia Bee
Oh Durla, you let us despise you the whole way and then finally did something selfless at the last. Also, Garibaldi would absolutely make David bagna cauda and I am here for it. :)
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