for The Edge Of The Dragon8/5/2023 c3 Guest
Soooo, Rikkard and Brandon never died? Fuck everything Aerys did? Ignore that Rhaeger (the Child Rapist) kidnapped a 15 year old girl?
Soooo, Rikkard and Brandon never died? Fuck everything Aerys did? Ignore that Rhaeger (the Child Rapist) kidnapped a 15 year old girl?
7/26/2021 c59 tjopisjg
I think this story is completely unfair towards House Martell. I think Oberyn had every right to have Lyanna and Rhaegar to be killed, even their children for being products of war.
I think this story is completely unfair towards House Martell. I think Oberyn had every right to have Lyanna and Rhaegar to be killed, even their children for being products of war.
1/28/2021 c7 sakura is a bitch
Okay I doubt Ned would bend knee to targ who caused war. And I really hate targ centric story
Okay I doubt Ned would bend knee to targ who caused war. And I really hate targ centric story
10/6/2020 c1 
7TheAttemptedWriter
I'm the type that tends to trust the negative reviews over the nice ones. Half the time they are more critical and have higher standards when it comes to writing. However a lot of the nice reviews are even going to tell you, to tighten up on your writing. And yes, I've noticed that you couldn't even spell Trident correctly for the title of the chapter.
Perhaps this may come off as arrogant, but I believe this story needs a rewrite. If the story gets that rewrite and becomes what it should be, do send me a message.
7TheAttemptedWriterI'm the type that tends to trust the negative reviews over the nice ones. Half the time they are more critical and have higher standards when it comes to writing. However a lot of the nice reviews are even going to tell you, to tighten up on your writing. And yes, I've noticed that you couldn't even spell Trident correctly for the title of the chapter.
Perhaps this may come off as arrogant, but I believe this story needs a rewrite. If the story gets that rewrite and becomes what it should be, do send me a message.
7/10/2020 c20 Guest
Im not prone to giving flames to someone s work but bro I have never been more at plot it's garbage what is this a Jon snow bashing
Im not prone to giving flames to someone s work but bro I have never been more at plot it's garbage what is this a Jon snow bashing
9/22/2018 c58 6BlandGardener
yo, i just got to the end and i was pulled in early on. great plot, character development, and some nice twists. Believe me, it was really good for a first story and made me a little jealous of your plot.
6BlandGardeneryo, i just got to the end and i was pulled in early on. great plot, character development, and some nice twists. Believe me, it was really good for a first story and made me a little jealous of your plot.
9/22/2018 c27 BlandGardener
i know this is late but this is late but this really well thought out and intriguing despite all the spelling and grammar issues. whoever said this is depressing forgot what this is based on or only want the flowery stuff like cinderella or some crap. you're doing great and i'll keep reading on interested.
i know this is late but this is late but this really well thought out and intriguing despite all the spelling and grammar issues. whoever said this is depressing forgot what this is based on or only want the flowery stuff like cinderella or some crap. you're doing great and i'll keep reading on interested.
9/20/2018 c56 Guest
And exactly why wouldn't Jon know valyrian?
This isn't even recognisable as being in the universe that GRRM created.
And exactly why wouldn't Jon know valyrian?
This isn't even recognisable as being in the universe that GRRM created.
9/20/2018 c58 cheryl pollock
House Dayne the be Great House of Dorne
House Dayne the be Great House of Dorne
9/16/2018 c57 nanold
i couldn't see Daegar suddenly accepting Jon as the rightful King so i guess he had to die...who got which egg?
i couldn't see Daegar suddenly accepting Jon as the rightful King so i guess he had to die...who got which egg?
9/14/2018 c1 5LunaEvanna Longbottom
I feel like this would be a really good story, but I can't get past the writing style.
5LunaEvanna LongbottomI feel like this would be a really good story, but I can't get past the writing style.
9/7/2018 c56 nanold
it was always going to be one or the other...pity either way but the signs were there from an early age that Jon and Daegar were going to end up fighting...dumbasses!
it was always going to be one or the other...pity either way but the signs were there from an early age that Jon and Daegar were going to end up fighting...dumbasses!