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This story was a joy to read the characters felt real and your emotional narration kept me hooked. I’d love to see it in comic style. Looking forward to more of your stories!
This story was a joy to read the characters felt real and your emotional narration kept me hooked. I’d love to see it in comic style. Looking forward to more of your stories!
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I had a great time reading your work. A comic book adaptation would be fantastic. Please let me know if you would like it to be made into a comic. After that, we can talk more about it and I'll go into great length about comics.
I had a great time reading your work. A comic book adaptation would be fantastic. Please let me know if you would like it to be made into a comic. After that, we can talk more about it and I'll go into great length about comics.
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2/20/2020 c8
12RWBY Lover 25
That was actually a nice chapter man I can't wait to see how the date goes and it was cool to see how "Mary Jane" fixes Peter up.

That was actually a nice chapter man I can't wait to see how the date goes and it was cool to see how "Mary Jane" fixes Peter up.
11/21/2019 c3
3SpaceGazer92
There is a hidden genius in all of these short stories that I have read here so far. I hope you keep up the great work and continue to update these short stories. I did enjoy that final "You hit the jackpot" moment, which always rings true for Spiderman. Just keep making your story awesome, my man!

There is a hidden genius in all of these short stories that I have read here so far. I hope you keep up the great work and continue to update these short stories. I did enjoy that final "You hit the jackpot" moment, which always rings true for Spiderman. Just keep making your story awesome, my man!
10/17/2019 c7
13Sailor Dragonball 87
Wow…great chapter! If you’re gonna use the comic characters, should I imagine the cartoon or MCU voices? I know both. Cartoon Peter’s like, what, 14-15? By the time Endgame's over he's practically 16. So, are you gonna revisit your previous chapters like you did here?

Wow…great chapter! If you’re gonna use the comic characters, should I imagine the cartoon or MCU voices? I know both. Cartoon Peter’s like, what, 14-15? By the time Endgame's over he's practically 16. So, are you gonna revisit your previous chapters like you did here?