for Harry Potter and The Chance at a New Life4/1 c5 Guest
Wow! I keep rereading your story and I still enjoy it I hope you have the time to update Keep writing! You have a great talent for it
Wow! I keep rereading your story and I still enjoy it I hope you have the time to update Keep writing! You have a great talent for it
3/19 c19 Guest
good story I hope all is well with you.
good story I hope all is well with you.
3/10 c1 Guest
He felt his magic serging through his body. I have autism and some dyslexia as well so nonworries from me just keep writing and have fun with it. Its your first attempt at something but even those that are professionals at something were once beginners and didnt know much. Hope all us well for you and keep writing whatever you want. I will read them. Thanks for a good fic for a story so farband if you need a beta reader i would be happy to help.
He felt his magic serging through his body. I have autism and some dyslexia as well so nonworries from me just keep writing and have fun with it. Its your first attempt at something but even those that are professionals at something were once beginners and didnt know much. Hope all us well for you and keep writing whatever you want. I will read them. Thanks for a good fic for a story so farband if you need a beta reader i would be happy to help.
2/6 c19 bookwm2016
It's always a joy to read any new updates! Your writing is brilliant, your characters engaging, and your plot is riviting! I look forward to reading more of your fantastic work!
It's always a joy to read any new updates! Your writing is brilliant, your characters engaging, and your plot is riviting! I look forward to reading more of your fantastic work!
2/3 c19 Naedine-Daki
I’m amazed by your writing and the way your story left such a powerful impression on me. I believe it has the potential to shine as a comic, and I’d love to discuss that with you. As a commission-based digital artist with a background in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to work with you.
Let’s connect on Discord: lishafang or Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123
I’m amazed by your writing and the way your story left such a powerful impression on me. I believe it has the potential to shine as a comic, and I’d love to discuss that with you. As a commission-based digital artist with a background in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to work with you.
Let’s connect on Discord: lishafang or Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123
1/23 c19 Sophiamay
Hello! I came across your story and was blown away by how amazing it is. Your writing really resonated with me, and I’d love the chance to discuss it with you.
I’m a commission-based artist who specializes in comic creation and have worked with authors across different platforms. I can’t help but feel your story would make an incredible comic, and I’d be thrilled to explore that idea with you.
If you’d like to chat, my Discord is danban1247275, and my Twitter is Mariegrey90. Hope to connect soon!
Hello! I came across your story and was blown away by how amazing it is. Your writing really resonated with me, and I’d love the chance to discuss it with you.
I’m a commission-based artist who specializes in comic creation and have worked with authors across different platforms. I can’t help but feel your story would make an incredible comic, and I’d be thrilled to explore that idea with you.
If you’d like to chat, my Discord is danban1247275, and my Twitter is Mariegrey90. Hope to connect soon!
1/4 c19 Paulatic
You ever notice how many of your conversations are one person speaking full paragraph after paragraph occasionally interspersed with the other(s) asking a question?
Those aren’t real conversations, or even effectively disguised expositions. They are clear signs that you don’t read/watch things with real conversation in them and/or that you play way too many action adventure/rpg games.
Because even in a QA context involving two people(even when one is Tealc) there’d be at least a couple more statements/expressions
Even if it was only a raised eyebrow and/or an “indeed”
You could really use some socializing fella, you’re fading away.
You ever notice how many of your conversations are one person speaking full paragraph after paragraph occasionally interspersed with the other(s) asking a question?
Those aren’t real conversations, or even effectively disguised expositions. They are clear signs that you don’t read/watch things with real conversation in them and/or that you play way too many action adventure/rpg games.
Because even in a QA context involving two people(even when one is Tealc) there’d be at least a couple more statements/expressions
Even if it was only a raised eyebrow and/or an “indeed”
You could really use some socializing fella, you’re fading away.
1/4 c1 Guest
Lol
Wheel of time? No wonder you can’t write worth shite if you think those series(barring Pendragon, don’t remember reading that) are high quality
Every now and then try to read or play something outside your comfort zone, it’s either that or interact with new people and get a real life.
Can’t see any other way your writing people will ever improve
Lol
Wheel of time? No wonder you can’t write worth shite if you think those series(barring Pendragon, don’t remember reading that) are high quality
Every now and then try to read or play something outside your comfort zone, it’s either that or interact with new people and get a real life.
Can’t see any other way your writing people will ever improve
12/29/2024 c5 ZzrcVt
What are these Retuu detectors supposed to prevent? I actually tried looking it up, but didn't find anything.
What are these Retuu detectors supposed to prevent? I actually tried looking it up, but didn't find anything.
12/26/2024 c19 Blaze1992
Nice to see another CH, glad to see that whole bomb thing was quietly handled. the idiot didn't even get a chance to rant or monologue before harry just spoofed him away.
Nice to see another CH, glad to see that whole bomb thing was quietly handled. the idiot didn't even get a chance to rant or monologue before harry just spoofed him away.
12/23/2024 c1 bdydvl
I had a lot of issues with most of the preparation but they're common in other fics so meh, there's no progress in any discipline that mc isn't specifically searching for in the decade Voldemort's been bodyless ?
Are the Big spaces normal? It looks like some missing text
Did Moody getting replaced not happen? Or did it happen in the background with him not knowing about it ?
Why is mc in such a hurry? And the aging ritual is a dumb idea
Did he forget to take a huge stock of wands ? Or did he just take some Books about it? Also i thought getting some magical animals (which should be included in the farms, at least for wand parts and potion ingredients) would play a bigger part,because if it's not mentionned i don't think he managed to take a phoenix or a dragon with him
Why does the (death)stone still has energy in itself?
If he just died and the rest of the fics was a reaction to the mayhem he caused it would be funny as hell
I had a lot of issues with most of the preparation but they're common in other fics so meh, there's no progress in any discipline that mc isn't specifically searching for in the decade Voldemort's been bodyless ?
Are the Big spaces normal? It looks like some missing text
Did Moody getting replaced not happen? Or did it happen in the background with him not knowing about it ?
Why is mc in such a hurry? And the aging ritual is a dumb idea
Did he forget to take a huge stock of wands ? Or did he just take some Books about it? Also i thought getting some magical animals (which should be included in the farms, at least for wand parts and potion ingredients) would play a bigger part,because if it's not mentionned i don't think he managed to take a phoenix or a dragon with him
Why does the (death)stone still has energy in itself?
If he just died and the rest of the fics was a reaction to the mayhem he caused it would be funny as hell