1/17/2018 c1 nitpickernose
Wow! I really loved this! It was a little surprising to see my name attached to it in any way, but it made me feel so. . . I don't want to say proud (since this was entirely yours) but honored that you felt any kind of inspiration from little old me.

I always wondered what a holy, legal union between them would be like, but I could never picture it, which is why I always only lightly insinuated it. But you did a fantastic job describing it and made it very believable! I also very much enjoyed the Japanese methodology. I'm not an expert on it, but it made the marriage much more realistic and gave it a wistful, sacred feeling.

I've always loved this concept, that if Watanuki and Yuuko had ended up together, that they would be able to have full lives and bring forth children. I know that in our world, the family is not always appreciated, but to me, my family has given me the most happiness. It is what gives me respite from a troubled world and has also grounded me. So I love when others feel the same as I do.

I also liked that Yuuko's name was still her name, just written differently. Very nice touch.

This was sitting on your computer and you never let me read it? Do you have any idea how I have scoured the internet looking for good fanfiction/inspiration? Your writing is like poetry and you should continue. Even if you move on from fanfiction/xxxholic. You have a fan, and I hope to see more from you. Maybe even I will pick up the pen again.

Fantastic work!