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for Persephone Jackson and a different choice

1/9/2018 c1 luffy180
Great concept. Doing separated paragraph instead of one big paragraph would make it easier to read in my opinion.
1/8/2018 c1 38Death Fury
Interesting start
1/8/2018 c1 2Otaku of Anime
You have a great start to your story and I am rather intrigued. Was this chapter just meant to be a prologue and that’s why it is so short? If this is how long the chapters are going to be, I can understand that. Keep up the great work, and best of luck in all your writing endeavors

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