for Adaptation2/1/2018 c1 
40Don Orbit
So pulling off the Touch Me joke as well huh? Welp I'm curious how this zerg character of yours will evolve in the future. After all zerg do basically only that. Aiming for perfection but never reaching it. Thus beginning a never ending spiral of evolution. Now my question is how the first part fits the second. I mean sure zerg evolve, but from overmind to zergsaurus rex is a bit difficult to imagine. I can think of his hands a bit like of those of a Therizinosaurus actually. The only things I probably had added were a hydralisk's crest on the head and maybe it's sharp mandible like side Jaws. Others than that it's a nice mix of zerg, tyranid and lizardman. If he however should fight Cocytus I'm quite sure that our chilly insect lord will get into trouble. As in real trouble if Evolution-san is experienced with countering technology with biological warfare (claws, teeth, armor, shells, poison and venom, night vision, infrared vision, ultraviolet vision, camouflage, regeneration, acid, parasites, viruses and bacteria, electric organs, bioluminescence... Okay if you don't want to use lamps and fire) then those swords of Cocytus might need to be brought to the blacksmith for reparations. And other things as well.
Anyway I'd like to see how you are going to do this. Just don't throw the Ultralisks too early into the mix.
40Don OrbitSo pulling off the Touch Me joke as well huh? Welp I'm curious how this zerg character of yours will evolve in the future. After all zerg do basically only that. Aiming for perfection but never reaching it. Thus beginning a never ending spiral of evolution. Now my question is how the first part fits the second. I mean sure zerg evolve, but from overmind to zergsaurus rex is a bit difficult to imagine. I can think of his hands a bit like of those of a Therizinosaurus actually. The only things I probably had added were a hydralisk's crest on the head and maybe it's sharp mandible like side Jaws. Others than that it's a nice mix of zerg, tyranid and lizardman. If he however should fight Cocytus I'm quite sure that our chilly insect lord will get into trouble. As in real trouble if Evolution-san is experienced with countering technology with biological warfare (claws, teeth, armor, shells, poison and venom, night vision, infrared vision, ultraviolet vision, camouflage, regeneration, acid, parasites, viruses and bacteria, electric organs, bioluminescence... Okay if you don't want to use lamps and fire) then those swords of Cocytus might need to be brought to the blacksmith for reparations. And other things as well.
Anyway I'd like to see how you are going to do this. Just don't throw the Ultralisks too early into the mix.
1/18/2018 c1 1LordGhostStriker
So that giant lizardman looks like Dehaka and the Titan lizardman looks like level 15 Dehaka in co-op missions
1LordGhostStrikerSo that giant lizardman looks like Dehaka and the Titan lizardman looks like level 15 Dehaka in co-op missions
1/14/2018 c1 Peroroncino
Sounds like Abathur to me but dude this is awesome and I want more ohh and please let him take all his zerg minions with him really a million zerg that would be awesome
Sounds like Abathur to me but dude this is awesome and I want more ohh and please let him take all his zerg minions with him really a million zerg that would be awesome
1/13/2018 c1 sonic
I liked the chapter!
I liked the chapter!
1/13/2018 c1 1Shalltear Bloodfallen
Why are we still here? Just to suffer? Every night, I can feel the oc's scratching my soul… and my heart... The good Overlord fanfictions I’ve read… then the original character fanfictions I’ve seen… It won’t stop hurting… It’s like they’re never ending. You feel it, too, don’t you? How shit this story is?
1Shalltear BloodfallenWhy are we still here? Just to suffer? Every night, I can feel the oc's scratching my soul… and my heart... The good Overlord fanfictions I’ve read… then the original character fanfictions I’ve seen… It won’t stop hurting… It’s like they’re never ending. You feel it, too, don’t you? How shit this story is?
1/13/2018 c1 RyuujiVantek
A nice start, i can see evolution participating in future wars in the NW.
Altho im curious, who was the person with momongga? Is it a guy or a girl? Welp gotta wait for next month. Please update fast! Hahaha
A nice start, i can see evolution participating in future wars in the NW.
Altho im curious, who was the person with momongga? Is it a guy or a girl? Welp gotta wait for next month. Please update fast! Hahaha
1/13/2018 c1 8UndeadLord22
First: Nice ducking story you just made in the first try.
2nd: Chill the fuck out
3rd: who's the new player?
4th: did you just copy my style of writing in the end part? Them quotes part?
8UndeadLord22First: Nice ducking story you just made in the first try.
2nd: Chill the fuck out
3rd: who's the new player?
4th: did you just copy my style of writing in the end part? Them quotes part?