for Worthy of Magic1/13 c70 AzvenusKestel
I read the while story, and the only thing I can say is good effort. You need to definitely work on your world building and character progression.
I read the while story, and the only thing I can say is good effort. You need to definitely work on your world building and character progression.
1/11 c70 Jeppie-078
Don't really like the ending. Didn't Harry say he hated being used and having his path laid out in front of him, and now he just accepts to be used as a weapon for Daphne and move according to her whims?
Don't really like the ending. Didn't Harry say he hated being used and having his path laid out in front of him, and now he just accepts to be used as a weapon for Daphne and move according to her whims?
1/10 c72 back2front
I can’t believe I haven’t read this b4. Its now in my top 5 ever. Author nglu smashed this outta the park. The most unique story ive read on FanFiction in years. Brilliantly written
I can’t believe I haven’t read this b4. Its now in my top 5 ever. Author nglu smashed this outta the park. The most unique story ive read on FanFiction in years. Brilliantly written
12/28/2024 c72 Guest
It's 4am, I've just read this in a day and I'm tired so won't do a long review, however, this is the best piece of fiction I've ever read like, wow. So thought provoking and actually made me think about how we live life ourselves. Thank you for this wonderful read and i hope to see more from you!
It's 4am, I've just read this in a day and I'm tired so won't do a long review, however, this is the best piece of fiction I've ever read like, wow. So thought provoking and actually made me think about how we live life ourselves. Thank you for this wonderful read and i hope to see more from you!
12/28/2024 c1 typical
You should label it as Horror,
You should label it as Horror,
12/25/2024 c72 Now Account
Fucking wow. That was a ride.
I have never seen op but insane Harry before, I liked it. The whole setup was very unique and interesting.
Fucking wow. That was a ride.
I have never seen op but insane Harry before, I liked it. The whole setup was very unique and interesting.
12/21/2024 c72 Cwhit930
This was a new plot line I haven’t read before. Thanks for the share. It was an insane ride through the mind of Harry.
This was a new plot line I haven’t read before. Thanks for the share. It was an insane ride through the mind of Harry.
11/29/2024 c1 omes848484
this has got to be one of the shittiest storys i have ever read.
harry is “evil”and not in the good type of evil thats scary and chilling no. its the “evil” in a retarded what the fûck is even going on type. mumbling about darwin and deserts.
truly incoherant and boring harry potter couldnt read past chapter 19.
this has got to be one of the shittiest storys i have ever read.
harry is “evil”and not in the good type of evil thats scary and chilling no. its the “evil” in a retarded what the fûck is even going on type. mumbling about darwin and deserts.
truly incoherant and boring harry potter couldnt read past chapter 19.
11/19/2024 c72 YMCM
Amazing story. I hope this isn't the end though, there is so much potential in this new world of magic.
Amazing story. I hope this isn't the end though, there is so much potential in this new world of magic.
11/19/2024 c1 IAmSoTired
Not all the way through this chapter yet, but is this implying that Harry is partially transformed into an obscurial or whatever, or is this just a weird qay his magic is manifesting to protect him?
Not all the way through this chapter yet, but is this implying that Harry is partially transformed into an obscurial or whatever, or is this just a weird qay his magic is manifesting to protect him?
11/12/2024 c72 anon
actually pretty ridiculous how good this is in an AU. well done.
actually pretty ridiculous how good this is in an AU. well done.
211/10/2024 c72 Eating Upside Down
Thank you for your work.
I think the story went from 7/10 to 3/10 to 8/10, to about 5/10. There were some plot threads that were very interesting, but there was several areas where the plot stalled. I also think the climax and ultimate ending were a pretty huge letdown compared to the build up. There’s seems to be a substantial bit of filler, that ultimately didn’t matter at all, like the vampires.
I loved bits of this story, but the ending feels disappointing- Daphne and a majority of the cast are identical to who they were at the beginning. Harry doesn’t feel any differently compared to the back half of the story. Huge events happened, but if it’s not about Harry, they feel as important and impactful as a shower.
Thank you for your work.
I think the story went from 7/10 to 3/10 to 8/10, to about 5/10. There were some plot threads that were very interesting, but there was several areas where the plot stalled. I also think the climax and ultimate ending were a pretty huge letdown compared to the build up. There’s seems to be a substantial bit of filler, that ultimately didn’t matter at all, like the vampires.
I loved bits of this story, but the ending feels disappointing- Daphne and a majority of the cast are identical to who they were at the beginning. Harry doesn’t feel any differently compared to the back half of the story. Huge events happened, but if it’s not about Harry, they feel as important and impactful as a shower.