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12/31/2019 c1 2ThePrincessOfPower
Thrilling story! Can't wait to read what happens next!
5/19/2019 c1 132rebecca-in-blue
Wow, this is one heck of an impressive story. I really love your writing style and word choices here; they give this story such an archaic quality that complements the mythological elements perfectly. I loved the birth scenes for Diana and Ariel, and the contrast between Hippolyta's joy over becoming a mother vs. Triton's heartbreak over losing his wife. How characteristically evil of Ursula to poison Triton against the Amazons, although I'd think he would know well enough not to listen to her advice.
7/2/2018 c1 Guest
Loved it! What a fantastic tale of my two favorite characters ever! And your writing is beautiful, Lorelei, you definatwly have writer's talent! Will you continue the story? I look forward to it! Thank you!
3/30/2018 c1 2angelvan105
This is very incredibly interestingly great and neat story! Way to go!
3/17/2018 c1 Dreiundzwanzig
Where has this fanfiction been all my life?
1/21/2018 c1 2KuletXCore
Nice remix! I like how you rehashed the Little Mermaid characters into Atlanteans and incorporated the conflict between them and the Amazons.

I will be looking forward to this! Followed, First Review!

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