for Before the Surface1/17/2018 c1 kahuna
It's nice to see the prequel and so well done.
Thank you for sharing with us.
It's nice to see the prequel and so well done.
Thank you for sharing with us.
1/18/2018 c1 dpdp
Excellent.
Looking forward t more of "The Return of King Arthur" Good luck with graduate school.
Excellent.
Looking forward t more of "The Return of King Arthur" Good luck with graduate school.
1/17/2018 c1 
67LAIsobel
absolutely wonderful. i think i haven't read pre-ep story about this one yet. it was very true to their characters. loved it!
67LAIsobelabsolutely wonderful. i think i haven't read pre-ep story about this one yet. it was very true to their characters. loved it!
1/16/2018 c1 houghtam
I just watched this episode the other day and was actually thinking about how they ended up beneath the surface. I could see this happening just like you wrote. I know you said this was a one shot, but ... pretty please? A little bit more?!
I just watched this episode the other day and was actually thinking about how they ended up beneath the surface. I could see this happening just like you wrote. I know you said this was a one shot, but ... pretty please? A little bit more?!
1/16/2018 c1 Guest
Well done, really enjoyed reading this. I love episode additions! They never told us in the show what happened before the events in the episode. This is very believable and you write the administrator and Brenna perfectly, I can totally see them. The scene with Jack and Sam hiding underground reminds me of them hiding from the Jaffa patrol in Out of Mind :) Thank you.
Well done, really enjoyed reading this. I love episode additions! They never told us in the show what happened before the events in the episode. This is very believable and you write the administrator and Brenna perfectly, I can totally see them. The scene with Jack and Sam hiding underground reminds me of them hiding from the Jaffa patrol in Out of Mind :) Thank you.
1/16/2018 c1 Guest
Excellent, so can see that happening
Excellent, so can see that happening