for Hold On (be strong)
31/1/2022 c12 DarkBan
A shame you stoped this story, but it was fun while it lasted, hope you're doing great :)
Thanks for the time and effort you put into this, and for sharing!
A shame you stoped this story, but it was fun while it lasted, hope you're doing great :)
Thanks for the time and effort you put into this, and for sharing!
11/11/2020 c1 GreatT'Phon1of4
I love a good "MC is an Orochimaru experiment" fiction. Keep up the good work! (only if you want to)
I love a good "MC is an Orochimaru experiment" fiction. Keep up the good work! (only if you want to)
9/29/2020 c12 BrettVT
I’m enjoying your story though saving all the Uchiha is kind of out there. It’s not like the cats wouldn’t be detected and stopped the second they crossed the barrier especially in such great number. Also the henge being stretched to be the ultimate never failing disguise when in the cannon is almost useless and see through to anybody with above average ability is kinda ridiculous. Even orichimaru had to wear people’s faces to make a disguise good enough to fool anyone. Either way hopefully you continue.
I’m enjoying your story though saving all the Uchiha is kind of out there. It’s not like the cats wouldn’t be detected and stopped the second they crossed the barrier especially in such great number. Also the henge being stretched to be the ultimate never failing disguise when in the cannon is almost useless and see through to anybody with above average ability is kinda ridiculous. Even orichimaru had to wear people’s faces to make a disguise good enough to fool anyone. Either way hopefully you continue.
9/19/2020 c1 cjdi
Your title literally screams GAY FAGGOT. mf dont do this shit here on this site. And if ur gonna be a fag atleast include that in the summary
Your title literally screams GAY FAGGOT. mf dont do this shit here on this site. And if ur gonna be a fag atleast include that in the summary
7/18/2020 c12 GalanthaDreams
This is really interesting, also, the laugh I let out when he told them his plan to take some of the Uchiha children, because he knew his cat family wanted Uchihas, was ridiculously loud. It would probably be more accurate to call it a cackle given the judgemental staring. In any case, it was truly an example of killing two birds with one stone and well, honestly, I'm all for the kids surviving. The Uchiha kids were completely innocent-plus who would ever piece together that the kids were taken by cat Summons? It's absolutely brilliant.
This is really interesting, also, the laugh I let out when he told them his plan to take some of the Uchiha children, because he knew his cat family wanted Uchihas, was ridiculously loud. It would probably be more accurate to call it a cackle given the judgemental staring. In any case, it was truly an example of killing two birds with one stone and well, honestly, I'm all for the kids surviving. The Uchiha kids were completely innocent-plus who would ever piece together that the kids were taken by cat Summons? It's absolutely brilliant.
5/15/2020 c12 Akusui
Damn, this story is really entertaining. Keep up the good work!
Damn, this story is really entertaining. Keep up the good work!
5/11/2020 c8 Calypto
have no clue what's going on for a fic that's been going on for almost 2 years. all the best.
have no clue what's going on for a fic that's been going on for almost 2 years. all the best.