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2/10/2018 c1 Guest
I guess yet again this story will add to your other non completed abandoned stories.
2/8/2018 c1 Guest
Is the captain still missing?
Update?
1/26/2018 c1 Guest
Are you actually going to update this story
1/21/2018 c1 Guest
Where’s chapter 2
1/20/2018 c1 Guest
What’s a ‘Phys hospital’?
Did you mean a ‘Psych’ (psychiatric) hospital?
1/20/2018 c2 Smallhill
This chapter is the same as chapter 1
1/20/2018 c1 gonza
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1/19/2018 c1 Sharon Shoemaker
Will there be more? This is intense.
1/18/2018 c1 Guest
I don’t think kate would trust any men around her for a while. Is this story actually going to get finished or is it getting abandoned like the rest of your stories.
1/17/2018 c1 guest
Not really a fan of torture/abuse stories, but to each their own. As another reviewer said, you REALLY need to put warnings in your summary. You also have quite a number of typos, both misspellings and labeling the speaker as Kevin every time that Ryan and Espo were speaking, making it confusing to follow. I would strongly suggest getting a good beta reader to help with your writing, as the mistakes are distracting.

Best of luck with this one.
1/17/2018 c1 Guest
This story looks interesting to read, as a previous reviewer said you should add rape to your summary to warn other readers.
1/17/2018 c1 Guest
Oh my god are you back again. Recognize these idiot storylines from a mile away. Your stories are always the same. Beckett who gets fucked. If you want to write porn, fine. But then write it good. Fact is that you have been writing thesw idiotic storylines for years, and your writing is still as bad, if not even worse, than in your first story. That's quite an achievement.

Oh yeah and someone whose intro contains a sentence with "is kinapes", I can't take seriously.
1/18/2018 c1 Hamlet 77
Nope, not for me... I’m out.
1/18/2018 c1 rokipatches
All I can say right now is Wow! This is starting off really intense and am looking forward to more reading more chapters...Good job
1/17/2018 c1 Smallhill
Excellent next chapter please. Is there going to be any more chapters
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