for Emmett's Major4/17/2018 c1 GawkyTC
I am rnjoying the story very much, I would however be able to read and understand it better if there was proper spacing.
I am rnjoying the story very much, I would however be able to read and understand it better if there was proper spacing.
1/24/2018 c2 GawkyTC
good start, a bit short, looking forward to seeing where this goes. If she has already met everyone or if her story begins before hand. If her story starts where she is meeting everyone as it goes on I would refrain from doing the first chapter with all that info, its almost a form of spoilers, you should work that info into the story.
good start, a bit short, looking forward to seeing where this goes. If she has already met everyone or if her story begins before hand. If her story starts where she is meeting everyone as it goes on I would refrain from doing the first chapter with all that info, its almost a form of spoilers, you should work that info into the story.