for Corruption and Captivation4/9/2020 c22 NatBeneddtti
I need to know if the story will continue, please! I love it, I'm crying, PLS
I need to know if the story will continue, please! I love it, I'm crying, PLS
8/16/2019 c22 
26Kifo Entiegon
I though Cole was going to reach for his gun when I started reading the nightmare. This story is really good. I hope you continue writing it.
26Kifo EntiegonI though Cole was going to reach for his gun when I started reading the nightmare. This story is really good. I hope you continue writing it.
10/31/2018 c22 Guest
This story is fantastic! Oh my gosh, the snark, the tension, the teasing- The amazing characterisation and plot! Dude. My friend, congrats on this great work and thank you heaps for sharing it with us! :D
I don't know if you plan to continue this story, but know if you decide to do so you will have in me an avid reader.
*aaaaaand bookmarked*
Wish you all the best, my friend!
Cheers,
JC
This story is fantastic! Oh my gosh, the snark, the tension, the teasing- The amazing characterisation and plot! Dude. My friend, congrats on this great work and thank you heaps for sharing it with us! :D
I don't know if you plan to continue this story, but know if you decide to do so you will have in me an avid reader.
*aaaaaand bookmarked*
Wish you all the best, my friend!
Cheers,
JC
9/9/2018 c22 Sy
Oh my gosh this chapter! Aaaaa, I hope you continue!
Oh my gosh this chapter! Aaaaa, I hope you continue!
8/11/2018 c1 8agent.pebble
AAAAAAA THIS FANFICTION IS PERFECT,,, I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON.
I hope you're okay as well, it's been a while
8agent.pebbleAAAAAAA THIS FANFICTION IS PERFECT,,, I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON.
I hope you're okay as well, it's been a while
6/15/2018 c22 8ABCSKW123-IX
Oh no, he's completely hammered. XD
Aaaaalright, at this point it's painfully obvious that Jay's not the only one whose defenses are lowered right now. Cole, Cole, Cole. P:
I'M CACKLIN ... Wow, Cole is SO flustered I'm losing it. "Please stop talking," no, no, please don't, I am LIVING for this.
Is that Jay comforting him back to sleep after that nightmare? Aaaah. Thank goodness for him, right?
8ABCSKW123-IXOh no, he's completely hammered. XD
Aaaaalright, at this point it's painfully obvious that Jay's not the only one whose defenses are lowered right now. Cole, Cole, Cole. P:
I'M CACKLIN ... Wow, Cole is SO flustered I'm losing it. "Please stop talking," no, no, please don't, I am LIVING for this.
Is that Jay comforting him back to sleep after that nightmare? Aaaah. Thank goodness for him, right?
6/4/2018 c22 mochi
Oh man, I got worried because foaming at the mouth usually signails alcohol poisoning :0 I hope Jay's okay. Thanks for the nice chapter!
Oh man, I got worried because foaming at the mouth usually signails alcohol poisoning :0 I hope Jay's okay. Thanks for the nice chapter!
6/4/2018 c22 Ninjafan
Okay, just got caught up with this. Sorry I haven't been reviewing.
This was ok. I guess. It pretty good, really.
And infinity war...oh my gosh!
I haven't even seen it, and then people just flat out crush me when they told me about what happened...
I went to see if it was true, and it was.
HOLY SHIT! NOOOOOO!
Okay, just got caught up with this. Sorry I haven't been reviewing.
This was ok. I guess. It pretty good, really.
And infinity war...oh my gosh!
I haven't even seen it, and then people just flat out crush me when they told me about what happened...
I went to see if it was true, and it was.
HOLY SHIT! NOOOOOO!
6/4/2018 c22 4RandomDragon2.0
well things have certainly gotten interesting between the pair haven't they?
Jay finally gets drunk and Cole has a nightmare
the story is amazing so far and I can't wait for more :D
4RandomDragon2.0well things have certainly gotten interesting between the pair haven't they?
Jay finally gets drunk and Cole has a nightmare
the story is amazing so far and I can't wait for more :D
6/4/2018 c22 93evelinaonline
All I have to say is that I love this fanfic to death ;W;
(Also *pat pats for Infinity War* We all felt the pain)
93evelinaonlineAll I have to say is that I love this fanfic to death ;W;
(Also *pat pats for Infinity War* We all felt the pain)
6/3/2018 c22 20FropessionalWriter
OKAY CAN I JUST-
WAS THAT JAY
WAS
THAT
JAY
IVE LITERALLY JUST BEEN SCREAMING CAUSE I BET THAT WAS JAY AT THE END THERE COMFORTING COLE AND IM JUST- HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME FEEL ALL WARM AND FUZZY
THESE TWO AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ALSO JAY IS JUST SO CUTE
CAN I SAY THAT PLEASE
HE LITERALLY BLURTED OUT WANTING TO SLEEP WITH COLE. TO /CUDDLE/ WITH HIM.
IM CRYING.
THIS IS HONESTLY MY FAVORITE THING EVER.
I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
20FropessionalWriterOKAY CAN I JUST-
WAS THAT JAY
WAS
THAT
JAY
IVE LITERALLY JUST BEEN SCREAMING CAUSE I BET THAT WAS JAY AT THE END THERE COMFORTING COLE AND IM JUST- HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME FEEL ALL WARM AND FUZZY
THESE TWO AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ALSO JAY IS JUST SO CUTE
CAN I SAY THAT PLEASE
HE LITERALLY BLURTED OUT WANTING TO SLEEP WITH COLE. TO /CUDDLE/ WITH HIM.
IM CRYING.
THIS IS HONESTLY MY FAVORITE THING EVER.
I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
6/1/2018 c21 Lv
Cole is so relatable. Imagining his pile of dishes with a red flag on top made me laugh so much XD
"Looks like you're staying here for the night,"
YES OMG YES !
Cole’s making Jay stay over can it get any better than that? XD
Can’t wait to see other drunken misadventures next chapter.
Cole is so relatable. Imagining his pile of dishes with a red flag on top made me laugh so much XD
"Looks like you're staying here for the night,"
YES OMG YES !
Cole’s making Jay stay over can it get any better than that? XD
Can’t wait to see other drunken misadventures next chapter.
5/27/2018 c21 8ABCSKW123-IX
*vibrates excitedly* Date? Date!
God, Cole, your apartment really is a mess.
Solo cups? Not was I was expecting. But then, what the hell do I know about alcohol.
I think Jay's the first person I've heard actually say alcohol of any kind tastes GOOD. Every other portrayal is just "this is awful and it stings the back of my throat, but to hell with it I'm not drinking to have a good time here". P:
JEEZ, THAT /IS/ GOING TO BE A HELLUVA HANGOVER. Also, Cole, you got Jay into this so the least you could do is attend the funeral. Be nice. :T
Oh come on Cole, your brain has great ideas! You should totally put a flag on top of your stack of dishes.
I'M LOSING M Y MIND, JAY, JAY DID YOU DOWN THE WHOLE BOTTLE OH MY GOD. /YOU QUOTED THAT VINE ABOUT "TELLING THE TIME"/; I JUST WOKE UP MY WHOLE FAMILY LAUGHING, PROBABLY -
Yes Cole. Please don't leave Jay on his own drunk to heck and back.
8ABCSKW123-IX*vibrates excitedly* Date? Date!
God, Cole, your apartment really is a mess.
Solo cups? Not was I was expecting. But then, what the hell do I know about alcohol.
I think Jay's the first person I've heard actually say alcohol of any kind tastes GOOD. Every other portrayal is just "this is awful and it stings the back of my throat, but to hell with it I'm not drinking to have a good time here". P:
JEEZ, THAT /IS/ GOING TO BE A HELLUVA HANGOVER. Also, Cole, you got Jay into this so the least you could do is attend the funeral. Be nice. :T
Oh come on Cole, your brain has great ideas! You should totally put a flag on top of your stack of dishes.
I'M LOSING M Y MIND, JAY, JAY DID YOU DOWN THE WHOLE BOTTLE OH MY GOD. /YOU QUOTED THAT VINE ABOUT "TELLING THE TIME"/; I JUST WOKE UP MY WHOLE FAMILY LAUGHING, PROBABLY -
Yes Cole. Please don't leave Jay on his own drunk to heck and back.