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5/15/2020 c2 Guest
Boring, all the mystery went out of the window.
5/14/2020 c9 1Woggie
I think the feeling was caused by Shirou not doing anything except blocking a single attack. Why did he bother dodging away from a flame that was cast as an AOE? It was gonna hit him anyway, so going straight through head on leaves you in the fire for the least amount of time. Combined with it allowing him to directly engage the enemy in order to prevent them attacking others, and the fact that Kanshou and Bakuya give him magic resistance, made what he did incompetent. Also, why did he bother standing around asking why the Kerberos was preventing him from saving people? Why didn't he make a sword to mulch the Kerberos so he can actually prevent people from being taken captive? It's not like he hasn't experienced the difficulties that a hostage situation can bring before, so I would think preventing that would be higher on the list of priorities than ogling dogs. Essentially he just stood around gawking at what was happening all chapter in stead of doing anything whatsoever. Standing still and jumping out of harm's way when people are at risk are not very Shirou things to do.
5/14/2020 c9 Uday Sra
good
5/14/2020 c9 Nohbody
Nice chapter, though I have to agree the pacing is a bit off. It felt a bit short for the amount of content. Besides that, it was pretty good.
Thanks for the new chapter!
5/13/2020 c9 adammflatt
Youve got a point about hades/pluto getting a bad rap. Everyone forgets he is the god of precious metals and the underworld, not the god of death. That’s a different god entirely
5/13/2020 c9 3coronadomontes
good
5/13/2020 c9 Mecaldar
That's a nice flock you got there would be shame if something happen to them. -spawns massive amounts of heart seeking spears- fly little birds fly Muhahahaha!
5/13/2020 c9 JustAGenericGuy
Great chapter. Waiting for the next one.
5/12/2020 c9 maesde
Very nice! I'm looking forward to reading more :)
5/12/2020 c9 Khoashex
great so far
5/12/2020 c9 Spartan3909
Thanks for the chapter _.
5/12/2020 c9 javi30
I agree Hades is definitely a good guy.
very good chapter.
keep writing.
blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.
5/12/2020 c9 2DannyPhantom619
Wonder if that was Merlin (Male or (Female - Prototype Fate)?

Anyways can't wait to read Shirou saying EXXXXCAAAALIBAAAAAAHHHHHHH!
5/12/2020 c9 10StoryReiter
Was, Emiya really this much of an airhead to be caught off guard in combat situations? I get that he's emotionally unstable due to Excaliburs but youd think a Grail War, two of its aftermaths and getting slapped by his counterpart and his SCREWED up history hed be able to take more. Still multiple literal broken swords sympathizing doenst seem nice. Yeah nice details of Emiya seeing other people with similar no plans approach as him. Also if this is how forthcoming he is with info, I can understand why Rin wants to tear her hair apart. Gae Bolg seems like a Chekovs gun while the Excaliburs... Emit a might be disappointed or reforge it into something more. Looking forward to the conflict and fight already. Avalons going to turn heads in the future. Thanks for the update and looking forward to Rias and Sonas reaction in the Peace Treaty already
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