for Misadventures of a broken Sword9/17/2019 c7 Anon A
Ravenous anon wish for more. Pmease guve moaaaar!
I dont know if I love your story or not, yet. I do know I really enjoy it thought.
Thanks you for sharing your story!
Ravenous anon wish for more. Pmease guve moaaaar!
I dont know if I love your story or not, yet. I do know I really enjoy it thought.
Thanks you for sharing your story!
9/14/2019 c7 Trife
In the anime Rias mentions the cost of bringing Issei back to life and it requiring almost all of her pawns to do it, if that helps you.
Trife
In the anime Rias mentions the cost of bringing Issei back to life and it requiring almost all of her pawns to do it, if that helps you.
Trife
9/14/2019 c7 FaraamKnight
Great to see you've updated again, keep up the good work and please update soon!
Great to see you've updated again, keep up the good work and please update soon!
9/13/2019 c7 vinayakdj1
I suggest that the next time you come back after a long hiatus, giving reminders or flashbacks in between the chapter to give your viewers a short recap.
Not everyone has the time and patience to go back and read all the chapters cuz they forgot.
Not hating or anything, just pointing out from experience
I suggest that the next time you come back after a long hiatus, giving reminders or flashbacks in between the chapter to give your viewers a short recap.
Not everyone has the time and patience to go back and read all the chapters cuz they forgot.
Not hating or anything, just pointing out from experience
9/13/2019 c7 
2Orumon
I do like the idea that Shirou is actually impossible to reincarnate into a devil, as it sets him apart and limits his strength. It keeps him from ultimately overriding the character tiers. Shirou as he is remains only high-mid tier by the worlds rankings at best.
2OrumonI do like the idea that Shirou is actually impossible to reincarnate into a devil, as it sets him apart and limits his strength. It keeps him from ultimately overriding the character tiers. Shirou as he is remains only high-mid tier by the worlds rankings at best.
9/13/2019 c7 Koncor the great
Serafall should be popping up soon if anyone can do the impossible it's her and I'm curious to what she will be doing to our favorite porcupine(note bad ends for hevdns feel sword stitching can be a bitch) honestly serafall and shirou are probably one of my favorite cross franchise pairings she can heal the trama and he has that weird magnetism that just seems like a thing that would amuse her.
Serafall should be popping up soon if anyone can do the impossible it's her and I'm curious to what she will be doing to our favorite porcupine(note bad ends for hevdns feel sword stitching can be a bitch) honestly serafall and shirou are probably one of my favorite cross franchise pairings she can heal the trama and he has that weird magnetism that just seems like a thing that would amuse her.
9/13/2019 c4 Koncor the great
Doesn't shirou have eye of the mind (fake) he should be a amazing chess player in time in fact just knowing the basics should make him a mid teir player.
Doesn't shirou have eye of the mind (fake) he should be a amazing chess player in time in fact just knowing the basics should make him a mid teir player.
9/12/2019 c7 1Kyo no Kitsune
I get the nonsensical values for reincarnating him. You could be going for the "not from this world, doesn't follow it's rules/scaling" route, or you could be going for the "Unlimited Blade Works - E~A" route in that his power can't really be scaled to a point. Or, you know, both.
1Kyo no KitsuneI get the nonsensical values for reincarnating him. You could be going for the "not from this world, doesn't follow it's rules/scaling" route, or you could be going for the "Unlimited Blade Works - E~A" route in that his power can't really be scaled to a point. Or, you know, both.
9/12/2019 c7 Guest
Not that I want Shirou to become a Devil but that's a damn lie. There's just as much if not more Shirou fics where he stays human.
Not that I want Shirou to become a Devil but that's a damn lie. There's just as much if not more Shirou fics where he stays human.
9/12/2019 c7 Guest-Questioner
First, Two big cliche's to worry about,
The so called, Issei harem, of Rias, Akeno and, Xenovia, cozy-ing up
to the alternative protagonist, who in this case, is being Shirou Emiya.
Making the issei harem trio(up above) "fall in love" with Shirou Emiya
is a not just any cliche, it is THE cliche, ninety-eight, to ninety-nine percent, of all Highschool DxD
crossover's, always, in some way, shape and form, have the alternate male protagonist,
"gain the heart's" of the trio(sometimes Quartet because it even includes Koneko the LO-LI she is)
Obvious guess, Because they(the three) have the "assets" that all male reader's want for their
favored male character, who is NOT Issei hyoudo, too have access to...
The Second cliche, Having the alternative protagonist,
being "reincarnated" as a servant to Rias Gremory.
Sona IS also a consideration, but Rias is almost always, the primary choice for reincarnation.
The point is, is that being reincarnated under either of them, is the second cliche,
of the highschool DxD crossover's.
I would ask that, You keep Shirou Emiya human throughout all this, as well as,
keeping the "Issei Harem" away from him.
All DxD fandom, expects the Protagonist, crossover or otherwise, to be reincarnated
by Rias or sona, and, being either of their love-interests', one or the other, possibly both.
First: Leave Shirou Emiya human.
Second: Keep any "love-interest" for Shirou outside of the two peerage's.
You do that, and you will go farther than most.
People will say, effing no, but those hate's are just from the cliche-er's,
those who continually choose the issei harem and, or, Sitri peerage,
for the protagonists' love-interest.
First, Two big cliche's to worry about,
The so called, Issei harem, of Rias, Akeno and, Xenovia, cozy-ing up
to the alternative protagonist, who in this case, is being Shirou Emiya.
Making the issei harem trio(up above) "fall in love" with Shirou Emiya
is a not just any cliche, it is THE cliche, ninety-eight, to ninety-nine percent, of all Highschool DxD
crossover's, always, in some way, shape and form, have the alternate male protagonist,
"gain the heart's" of the trio(sometimes Quartet because it even includes Koneko the LO-LI she is)
Obvious guess, Because they(the three) have the "assets" that all male reader's want for their
favored male character, who is NOT Issei hyoudo, too have access to...
The Second cliche, Having the alternative protagonist,
being "reincarnated" as a servant to Rias Gremory.
Sona IS also a consideration, but Rias is almost always, the primary choice for reincarnation.
The point is, is that being reincarnated under either of them, is the second cliche,
of the highschool DxD crossover's.
I would ask that, You keep Shirou Emiya human throughout all this, as well as,
keeping the "Issei Harem" away from him.
All DxD fandom, expects the Protagonist, crossover or otherwise, to be reincarnated
by Rias or sona, and, being either of their love-interests', one or the other, possibly both.
First: Leave Shirou Emiya human.
Second: Keep any "love-interest" for Shirou outside of the two peerage's.
You do that, and you will go farther than most.
People will say, effing no, but those hate's are just from the cliche-er's,
those who continually choose the issei harem and, or, Sitri peerage,
for the protagonists' love-interest.
9/12/2019 c7 Ashborn2271
The problem with shirou s charecter is that he always plays passive 99% of the fics written he’s a charecter that will only react not proact he never prepares only attacks after he’s attacked that why emiya is better yes ready to fight for himself unlike shirou. In this fic he’s handing out his abilities to everyone like a cheap chin glass. If it were emiya he would ready to kick ass and take names. Chapter wasn’t much to go on except for the little fight.
The problem with shirou s charecter is that he always plays passive 99% of the fics written he’s a charecter that will only react not proact he never prepares only attacks after he’s attacked that why emiya is better yes ready to fight for himself unlike shirou. In this fic he’s handing out his abilities to everyone like a cheap chin glass. If it were emiya he would ready to kick ass and take names. Chapter wasn’t much to go on except for the little fight.