for Misadventures of a broken Sword11/30/2018 c5 
2miguelgiuliano.co
El capitulo esta genial y esperó con ansias por el próximo capítulo.
Pero hay algo que estas fallando y es en el crecimiento de Shirou, tienes que hacer que mejore con el uso de sus propias armas. Desde practicar con Espadas, Lanzas, Hachas y otras armas más para aumentar su conocimiento.
Creo que Shirou podría aprender runas para potenciar algunas de sus proyecciones sin nombre.
Para la saga de las espadas sagradas tienes que darle un nivel aceptable a tu Shirou para que no se delaté si es que tu no quieres eso.
Solo una cosa más que Issei no tenga un aumento de poder sacado del culo eso es lo mas horrible que hace DxD.
2miguelgiuliano.coEl capitulo esta genial y esperó con ansias por el próximo capítulo.
Pero hay algo que estas fallando y es en el crecimiento de Shirou, tienes que hacer que mejore con el uso de sus propias armas. Desde practicar con Espadas, Lanzas, Hachas y otras armas más para aumentar su conocimiento.
Creo que Shirou podría aprender runas para potenciar algunas de sus proyecciones sin nombre.
Para la saga de las espadas sagradas tienes que darle un nivel aceptable a tu Shirou para que no se delaté si es que tu no quieres eso.
Solo una cosa más que Issei no tenga un aumento de poder sacado del culo eso es lo mas horrible que hace DxD.
11/7/2018 c4 1Lord of Beasts
Writing’s good, but the story’s been a bit dull so far, I reay hope it picks up.
1Lord of BeastsWriting’s good, but the story’s been a bit dull so far, I reay hope it picks up.
11/4/2018 c4 JumpingToaster
Not that much going on but then again not much content has come up just yet.
Not that much going on but then again not much content has come up just yet.
10/31/2018 c4 Marsuvees Black The Dark Lord
While I have enjoyed the story so far... I gotta ask... is Shirou a lolicon because I need to know so I can back out now...
While I have enjoyed the story so far... I gotta ask... is Shirou a lolicon because I need to know so I can back out now...
10/24/2018 c4 Shade
I liked it, these last few chapters have been a good opening for shirou into the dxd world, and I am looking forward to when he gets himself involved into more trouble alongside the two peerages and how he will interact with them. Looking forward to the next chapter, hope it will come as soon as possible.
P.s could go into more of shirou's training and his limits, will Azazel be able to help him be able to channel more magic energy from/through his body? If that happens? Can't wait till shirou finds out about Excalibur.
I liked it, these last few chapters have been a good opening for shirou into the dxd world, and I am looking forward to when he gets himself involved into more trouble alongside the two peerages and how he will interact with them. Looking forward to the next chapter, hope it will come as soon as possible.
P.s could go into more of shirou's training and his limits, will Azazel be able to help him be able to channel more magic energy from/through his body? If that happens? Can't wait till shirou finds out about Excalibur.
10/23/2018 c4 skrapsynneh
There hasn't been much action yet but I enjoy this slice of l8fe while it lasts. Thanks for the chapter. I look forwards to more.
There hasn't been much action yet but I enjoy this slice of l8fe while it lasts. Thanks for the chapter. I look forwards to more.
10/23/2018 c4 Ashborn2271
So their pressuring him slyly into a relationship with ditto there fore he becomes her servant or something. You should’ve changed him and Archer. Now that guy would have fucked up these shits. He is to innocent, he’ll likely become a pawn to azaleal or the devil. Pointless.
So their pressuring him slyly into a relationship with ditto there fore he becomes her servant or something. You should’ve changed him and Archer. Now that guy would have fucked up these shits. He is to innocent, he’ll likely become a pawn to azaleal or the devil. Pointless.
10/23/2018 c4 Deaths Remnant
I really liked it and how shirou isn't op cause the main thing about shirou and archer is they both have always fought opponents and creatures stronger than himself it's how archer got his combat style and not only that how would shirou become a hero if he was already too strong to fight anything most stories about heroes is overcoming something greater than themselves which most cases are stronger enemies or monsters. Thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next
I really liked it and how shirou isn't op cause the main thing about shirou and archer is they both have always fought opponents and creatures stronger than himself it's how archer got his combat style and not only that how would shirou become a hero if he was already too strong to fight anything most stories about heroes is overcoming something greater than themselves which most cases are stronger enemies or monsters. Thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next
10/23/2018 c4 YuukiAsuna-Chan
Oh i dont know, that advice about Gabriel seemed like it could come in handy.
Oh i dont know, that advice about Gabriel seemed like it could come in handy.
10/23/2018 c1 Paxloria
Love it so far!
At first I thought it started out very similar to another story I read, but then it just suddenly went off in a completely different direction plus a twist!
I'm enjoying this a lot!
Love it so far!
At first I thought it started out very similar to another story I read, but then it just suddenly went off in a completely different direction plus a twist!
I'm enjoying this a lot!