for Misadventures of a broken Sword3/8/2022 c11 Anon A
Welcome back. Hope it gets better for you this year.
Thanks for the chapter. Also. YEEEEEES ADD XENOVIA AND POSSIBLY SONA IN YA HAREEEM SHIROU!
Also I hope and dont hope thqt the night is actually Mochan.
Welcome back. Hope it gets better for you this year.
Thanks for the chapter. Also. YEEEEEES ADD XENOVIA AND POSSIBLY SONA IN YA HAREEEM SHIROU!
Also I hope and dont hope thqt the night is actually Mochan.
3/8/2022 c11 shadyxlr
Happy to see a new chapter and I hope you get back into the swing of things with no issues.
Happy to see a new chapter and I hope you get back into the swing of things with no issues.
3/8/2022 c11 xbox432
Heh, Mittelt... She's experienced enough that she can read between the lines with Sona and Xenovia. She KNOWS what kind of effect Shirou has on the girls around him. Now the question becomes, is she going to help things along or is she going to try and keep him for herself? If anything, she seems a bit amused at how things are progressing...
Heh, Mittelt... She's experienced enough that she can read between the lines with Sona and Xenovia. She KNOWS what kind of effect Shirou has on the girls around him. Now the question becomes, is she going to help things along or is she going to try and keep him for herself? If anything, she seems a bit amused at how things are progressing...
3/8/2022 c11 
7LoverOfArtemis
Glad to see this get an update. I hope to see another update in the near future.
7LoverOfArtemisGlad to see this get an update. I hope to see another update in the near future.
3/8/2022 c11 maesde
Nice to see an update! I quite like this, and I also enjoyed this one :). Hope to have more soon!
I am assuming Shirou is being seen as some sort of Arthur reincarnation by some, and the knight is the actual reincarnation and wants to prove herself. Can't wait for more!
Nice to see an update! I quite like this, and I also enjoyed this one :). Hope to have more soon!
I am assuming Shirou is being seen as some sort of Arthur reincarnation by some, and the knight is the actual reincarnation and wants to prove herself. Can't wait for more!
2/5/2022 c2 Insulted fan
I did not understand. Is this pathetic bird stronger than Gilgamesh? I see the author of Nasuverse did not even study.
I did not understand. Is this pathetic bird stronger than Gilgamesh? I see the author of Nasuverse did not even study.
7/6/2021 c10 Shade
Good chapter. Interested to find out how Mordred ended up their and what that means and how many others may show up. How the rest of the world will react to shirou creating Excalibur will be interesting.
Good chapter. Interested to find out how Mordred ended up their and what that means and how many others may show up. How the rest of the world will react to shirou creating Excalibur will be interesting.
6/27/2021 c10 35Zeromaru Chaos Mode
hope this isnt dead. it's been an interesting ride. Shirou being tied to events but not so directly he's overshadowing anyone.
35Zeromaru Chaos Modehope this isnt dead. it's been an interesting ride. Shirou being tied to events but not so directly he's overshadowing anyone.
6/2/2021 c10 10PsylentFox
I enjoyed the chapter, however with how well everything else was written leading up to this point the pentultimate reveal of Excalibur felt... a little cheap. The fact that he’d only gone into the first line of his aria makes it feel even more off. I’m not saying he should have gone the full monty, but a least three or four lines in should have been sufficient, that way you could have gotten into everyone’s reactions in an interlude as they watched a mere human warp reality to his whims in a fashion that he shouldn’t have been capable of... all to reveal a shining blade of hope that made even the devils weep at its brilliance.
Looking forward to the next chapter even still. lol
10PsylentFoxI enjoyed the chapter, however with how well everything else was written leading up to this point the pentultimate reveal of Excalibur felt... a little cheap. The fact that he’d only gone into the first line of his aria makes it feel even more off. I’m not saying he should have gone the full monty, but a least three or four lines in should have been sufficient, that way you could have gotten into everyone’s reactions in an interlude as they watched a mere human warp reality to his whims in a fashion that he shouldn’t have been capable of... all to reveal a shining blade of hope that made even the devils weep at its brilliance.
Looking forward to the next chapter even still. lol
5/5/2021 c10 1Rhyn3
So, the Knight. Clearly Zelretch's doing, as she called Shirou, "EMIYA". I'm guessing a Pseudo Servant Mordred given the description of how she fought, the call out to being a saberface, the red manaburst, yet her being "human" to Shirou.
Also, what changed and let Shirou trace Excalibur?
1Rhyn3So, the Knight. Clearly Zelretch's doing, as she called Shirou, "EMIYA". I'm guessing a Pseudo Servant Mordred given the description of how she fought, the call out to being a saberface, the red manaburst, yet her being "human" to Shirou.
Also, what changed and let Shirou trace Excalibur?
4/20/2021 c10 Guest
The ending of this was noticeably sparse. The pacing picked up in a flowery and fleety way. It needed feeling anticlimactic.
The ending of this was noticeably sparse. The pacing picked up in a flowery and fleety way. It needed feeling anticlimactic.