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2/18/2018 c3 10Darth Saevus
Overall the main idea is good. Thr characters need more direct depiction about their personality. There are minor grammar errors, error punctuations and bad arrangement of words. Ergo, the story is too fast paced in places that it isn't supposed to be.
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