for Despair's Sanctuary7/2/2018 c4 
4AmaryllisGreen
I know it's late but thanks for accepting my OC! She hasn't been revealed yet but I can't wait for her introduction. Anyway, the people that have been revealed so far seem interesting; Reiga very much lively, not what I would expect from someone doing forensics and Yurika, her hate for non-Ultimates is strong but we don't know why. And, of course, the main character, Toru, seems very sweet and friendly but has got some spunk, really liking her so far! That's all from me, great job so far and keep up the effort!
4AmaryllisGreenI know it's late but thanks for accepting my OC! She hasn't been revealed yet but I can't wait for her introduction. Anyway, the people that have been revealed so far seem interesting; Reiga very much lively, not what I would expect from someone doing forensics and Yurika, her hate for non-Ultimates is strong but we don't know why. And, of course, the main character, Toru, seems very sweet and friendly but has got some spunk, really liking her so far! That's all from me, great job so far and keep up the effort!
7/2/2018 c4 9Hikaru Leach
It's really good! There seems to be an interesting mix of characters so i can't wait for the game to be announced. Aoi seems so cute. And speaks like I though she would!
9Hikaru LeachIt's really good! There seems to be an interesting mix of characters so i can't wait for the game to be announced. Aoi seems so cute. And speaks like I though she would!
7/2/2018 c4 TheRoseShadow21
My girl is here, yay! You did well with her introduction :)
Anyway, the other characters...Yurika seemed nice until her attitude towards non-ultimates showed up. As fun as she can be, she'll also cause conflict, I'm sure of it.
Anyway, Joker Valentine seems like a fun guy (and I'm sure his matchmaking will also have interesting consequences), and so does Reiga. I can't get much of a handle on Aoi at the moment, but I like her too.
So, yeah, I look forward to the next set of intros! Keep up the good work!
My girl is here, yay! You did well with her introduction :)
Anyway, the other characters...Yurika seemed nice until her attitude towards non-ultimates showed up. As fun as she can be, she'll also cause conflict, I'm sure of it.
Anyway, Joker Valentine seems like a fun guy (and I'm sure his matchmaking will also have interesting consequences), and so does Reiga. I can't get much of a handle on Aoi at the moment, but I like her too.
So, yeah, I look forward to the next set of intros! Keep up the good work!
5/17/2018 c3 1FairyBookworm
Ah! I'm late reviewing! I read it on the same day the chapter came out and thought I'd review later and I kind of forgot to. Sorry T.T
Anyway, Great chapter! Makes me excited for more. I was really really excited when I saw the story updated. First of all, I absolutely loved how you wrote my OC. Queen Suji the first is almost better than I imagined her. I was incredibly happy when Whitney, even if unwilingly, actually started calling her by that. And her entrance was fabulous. I also enjoyed that Toru introduced herself as a peasant. You really nailed it.
As to the other characters. I really love Toru. She embraces her uselessness and some of her reactions are really relateable.
Herman Schulze seems like a huge stereotype, but we haven't seen much of him yet so I may be wrong. But I continue to be excited to see more of him he's definitly one of my favourites.
Mitsuru is intresting. I don't know if I like her yet.
Whitney is amusing. Mainly because of her interactions with my OC, but her whole attitude is interesting aswell.
Oni seems a bit chuuni but it's intresting. I like Oni.
Bleach is Bleach, but that's just who he is. Whatever that means. Fun guy. My favourite so far.
Yurika seems a lot like my OC and I loved her introduction. The pleasure is all YOURS. I guess Torus reaction was due to encountering another arrogant person. I have a feeling Yurika and Suji, ehm I mean Queen Suji, will become best friends... or the worst enemys. Really both is very likely. I'm really excited for their first interaction.
Really great chapter. Thank you for writing. :3
1FairyBookwormAh! I'm late reviewing! I read it on the same day the chapter came out and thought I'd review later and I kind of forgot to. Sorry T.T
Anyway, Great chapter! Makes me excited for more. I was really really excited when I saw the story updated. First of all, I absolutely loved how you wrote my OC. Queen Suji the first is almost better than I imagined her. I was incredibly happy when Whitney, even if unwilingly, actually started calling her by that. And her entrance was fabulous. I also enjoyed that Toru introduced herself as a peasant. You really nailed it.
As to the other characters. I really love Toru. She embraces her uselessness and some of her reactions are really relateable.
Herman Schulze seems like a huge stereotype, but we haven't seen much of him yet so I may be wrong. But I continue to be excited to see more of him he's definitly one of my favourites.
Mitsuru is intresting. I don't know if I like her yet.
Whitney is amusing. Mainly because of her interactions with my OC, but her whole attitude is interesting aswell.
Oni seems a bit chuuni but it's intresting. I like Oni.
Bleach is Bleach, but that's just who he is. Whatever that means. Fun guy. My favourite so far.
Yurika seems a lot like my OC and I loved her introduction. The pleasure is all YOURS. I guess Torus reaction was due to encountering another arrogant person. I have a feeling Yurika and Suji, ehm I mean Queen Suji, will become best friends... or the worst enemys. Really both is very likely. I'm really excited for their first interaction.
Really great chapter. Thank you for writing. :3
5/15/2018 c3 BlueTanaka
I know all to well how much time college takes up, which is exactly why I'm only now posting a review. Thanks a bunch for including my character, by the by
As for this first introduction chapter, these seven people seem very interesting and unique. I'm also curious as to why Toru seemingly knows this cheerleader, or at least is dreading meeting her.
I know all to well how much time college takes up, which is exactly why I'm only now posting a review. Thanks a bunch for including my character, by the by
As for this first introduction chapter, these seven people seem very interesting and unique. I'm also curious as to why Toru seemingly knows this cheerleader, or at least is dreading meeting her.
5/13/2018 c3 137TheRoseShadow21
Yay, first set of intros! They all seem pretty interesting so far, though it seems like we have quite a few haughty/aloof/eccentric ones this chapter (Suzume, Whitney, Bleach, Oni). Toru seems like a fun character (I'm assuming she's the protag?), sort of relaxed and cheerful but also quick to anger. Herman's clearly the more quiet type but he seems fairly okay too. Mitsuru is cool too.
Anyway, great work, I look forward to the next chapter
137TheRoseShadow21Yay, first set of intros! They all seem pretty interesting so far, though it seems like we have quite a few haughty/aloof/eccentric ones this chapter (Suzume, Whitney, Bleach, Oni). Toru seems like a fun character (I'm assuming she's the protag?), sort of relaxed and cheerful but also quick to anger. Herman's clearly the more quiet type but he seems fairly okay too. Mitsuru is cool too.
Anyway, great work, I look forward to the next chapter
5/12/2018 c3 Pretty Palutena
AHHH I already LIVE For Yurika omfg, shes going to be a blast. The way you wrote Whitney was extremely well done, and her interactions with Queen Suji are hilarious! Honestly I'm loving everyone so far, and I can't wait for the rest!
AHHH I already LIVE For Yurika omfg, shes going to be a blast. The way you wrote Whitney was extremely well done, and her interactions with Queen Suji are hilarious! Honestly I'm loving everyone so far, and I can't wait for the rest!
4/12/2018 c2 3Hexcav-Lio
The cast really looks interesting.
I understand, school gets in the way...(I lived through that), I'm ready to wait for this, because it really sounds interesting.
3Hexcav-LioThe cast really looks interesting.
I understand, school gets in the way...(I lived through that), I'm ready to wait for this, because it really sounds interesting.
4/11/2018 c2 137TheRoseShadow21
Eeeee both Satoru and Rio are accepted in this cast? I am blessed. Thank you! :)
I look forward to the story starting!
137TheRoseShadow21Eeeee both Satoru and Rio are accepted in this cast? I am blessed. Thank you! :)
I look forward to the story starting!
4/11/2018 c2 1FairyBookworm
The cast looks great! I'm really excited for Herman Schulze for some reason. XD The Ultimate Pawnbroker sounds intresting aswell! Also thanks for accepting my girl. I can see this will be fun!
1FairyBookwormThe cast looks great! I'm really excited for Herman Schulze for some reason. XD The Ultimate Pawnbroker sounds intresting aswell! Also thanks for accepting my girl. I can see this will be fun!
4/10/2018 c2 Pretty Palutena
Yay, Whitney made it! I saw her name and literally gasped, scaring the shit outta my parents lmaoo! Anyway, thecast looks really interesting, but I have a feeling I'm going to like the Cheerleader and Matchmaker the most out of everyone. I understand how busy you are (school is KILLING ME RIGHT NOW OOF) and I'll be readt for the next update
Yay, Whitney made it! I saw her name and literally gasped, scaring the shit outta my parents lmaoo! Anyway, thecast looks really interesting, but I have a feeling I'm going to like the Cheerleader and Matchmaker the most out of everyone. I understand how busy you are (school is KILLING ME RIGHT NOW OOF) and I'll be readt for the next update
3/9/2018 c1 FairyBookworm
I'm still very excited for this. :) I know that feeling of having way too much to do. I'm kinda sad that I never got to finish the second OC I wanted to send you, but I had other work aswell so yeah. :/ Anyway, I'm excited and paitently waiting for the official cast to come out. :P
I'm still very excited for this. :) I know that feeling of having way too much to do. I'm kinda sad that I never got to finish the second OC I wanted to send you, but I had other work aswell so yeah. :/ Anyway, I'm excited and paitently waiting for the official cast to come out. :P
2/25/2018 c2 4AmaryllisGreen
Oh, I didn't even realise you had made a new FanFiction until now. Talk about being late to a party XD
Not sure if you remember me but you've submitted a character to my SYOC which I've yet to properally start. Yeah... sorry about that but hopefully, I'll be able to update soon.
Anyway, I'll be sure to submit a character. Really looking forward to this and good luck!
4AmaryllisGreenOh, I didn't even realise you had made a new FanFiction until now. Talk about being late to a party XD
Not sure if you remember me but you've submitted a character to my SYOC which I've yet to properally start. Yeah... sorry about that but hopefully, I'll be able to update soon.
Anyway, I'll be sure to submit a character. Really looking forward to this and good luck!
2/23/2018 c2 TheRoseShadow21
The seventh division should have a total of '1' since one of the characters I submitted (male one) was from that division. Anyway, good luck with your exams and things!
The seventh division should have a total of '1' since one of the characters I submitted (male one) was from that division. Anyway, good luck with your exams and things!