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8/6 c7 ToddGilliss
Hope you are able to overcome your problems

Good luck
8/6 c5 ToddGilliss
Write this in your native language and have a computer software translator work it out for you

good luck
8/5 c1 Spider of Dreams
wtf did I just read?
8/5 c1 Ares Peverell
The bad grammar cough*English*cough makes it unreadable. Get a beta or if you already have one, then fire him and get a new one.
1/4 c1 yeet
Horrible grammar. please go back to school.
2/28/2018 c6 Dennis Wayne Daugherty
Please update soon i love this story
2/28/2018 c6 Dennis Wayne Daugherty
Please update soon i love this story
2/20/2018 c3 Guest
Grammar is extremely poor. Good luck with the story though.
2/20/2018 c6 Guest
WOW update
2/19/2018 c5 ljdlb
improve your grammer
2/15/2018 c5 Guest
nice update
2/15/2018 c5 57Perseus12
Mama Mia! Please continue the story, the excitement thrills me!
2/15/2018 c5 Yaw613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Sorry if I am annoying you with my reviews it's just that I really like your stories a lot.
2/15/2018 c5 Vi38
Good chapter
2/4/2018 c4 Guest
O.K story
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