for God of Heroes1/3/2021 c1 kerry.wallace40
You had my curiosity but now you have my attention i like where you were going and the flow is good if a slight bit rough as some of the best i have read have made me lose a bit of time when reading them, i have followed the story and hope to see more in the future.
You had my curiosity but now you have my attention i like where you were going and the flow is good if a slight bit rough as some of the best i have read have made me lose a bit of time when reading them, i have followed the story and hope to see more in the future.
4/23/2018 c1 Guest
pls update soon
pls update soon
2/1/2018 c1 fraxures
Nice first chapter I really enjoyed it the dialogue was well done and I like how you introduced Naruto to Goku can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if you're going to do a pairing if you do maybe a female broly or female
majin buu
Nice first chapter I really enjoyed it the dialogue was well done and I like how you introduced Naruto to Goku can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if you're going to do a pairing if you do maybe a female broly or female
majin buu
2/1/2018 c1 
3Sombra-Solitaria
Muy interesante la historia, espero con ganas ver como la seguirás desarrollando.
3Sombra-SolitariaMuy interesante la historia, espero con ganas ver como la seguirás desarrollando.
1/31/2018 c1 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
1/30/2018 c1 Guest
Surprised you didn't tell goku about bardock I don't think that's actually been covered in dragon ball but I could be wrong
Surprised you didn't tell goku about bardock I don't think that's actually been covered in dragon ball but I could be wrong