8/6/2018 c3 JolioMs abajo
Se me traspapelaron los capítulos en la resubida y ahora no puedo dejar review con mi cuenta.

Pobre Dipper, se le viene difícil con lo de Wendy, ojala y se las arregle para sobrevivir el verano y de paso, tenga el apoyo de Pacifica.

Lo necesitará.

Por lo demás, ya tenemos tres grandes jugadores, ahora a ver que sucede.

4/3/2018 c3 35Jolio
Finalmente, después de diez mil años de conflicto constante algo va a cambiar, y no será gracias a cierto incompetente que ha fallado doce cruzadas solo para triunfar en la última y encontrarse en un callejón, habiendo avanzado exactamente un planeta (a menos que su plan fuese burlarnos desde un principio y hacer una gran jugada final, en cuyo caso adiós universo!).

Pero discreto. Interesante como va todo, veamos que sigue y ojala que ahora la tierra tenga una mejor oportunidad, que creo que la tendrá.

Ave Imperator!

3/20/2018 c2 5Mastercold
Okey ahora me queda un poco mas claro las cosas, aun asi espeo la revelacion del problema central en concreto, sigue siendo super intrezante, me come un poco la duda.
Espero seguir oyendo de ti.
Con cariño tu lector Mastercold

3/3/2018 c2 20Gorath089
Sera interesante ver como cambia la tematica de gravityfalls tan rápidamente, puesto que es inicialmente una serie para niños, estos conceptos del inicio me dejan mas preguntas para imaginar que podria pasar, sin duda sera interesante ver como los "problemas" comunes que suceden en la serie son apocados por una amenaza o desenlace mas importante.

tendre que ponerme al dia con el concepto total de Warhammer

3/2/2018 c2 12Reila Vann
:O!

2/24/2018 c2 16Rex3003
Pues como te digo esto, me encanta el fic pero últimamente no me llama la atención Gravity falls. Pero solo por ser tu lo seguiré hasta el final ::3

Buenos primeros dos capítulos por cierto :'3

Suerte

2/23/2018 c1 miguel.puentedejesus
Muy Bueno!
Bastante Prometedor!
Me Fascinó!
Aunque Una Que Otra Idea No Comparto Tu Punto De Vista, Me Encanto!
Perfecto!

2/5/2018 c1 774The Cowardly Christian
I like this, thank you for taking on my challenge.

And to help all my English brethren:

(Translation)

-I wonder if I have enough mushrooms and toads to carry out this chaos- to speak normal

(I wish I did not have to read your perverts) telepathic communication

- why should you stop meddling where they do not call you - thoughts of your own

/ Change of scene /

/ somewhere and in some distant future /

He has been this way for more than 100 years since the generation of his most favored son, he has been the guardian of a gigantic empire that embraced most of the galaxy, always vigilant of how his species fights against the horrors of the hostile galaxy in the who live, grow and progress being a sign of the power of humanity.

Guardian? ... rather the forced spectator of the most horrible of his nightmares come true!

Unified? Progress? there is only one humanity, which instead of being unified under science, logic, compassion, values and hope, is a putrid corpse moved by hatred, ignorance, paranoia, fear and self-corruption.

A disaster of civilization in which the blood of the innocent is shed by the evil and righteous alike, one in whatever is hope is buried in a mountain of corpses, debris, and bathed in the blood of him and who wanted to protect

A horrible excuse for civilization that when it did not attack itself for absurd reasons, was attacked by all the other threats of the galaxy, men who could not come in few numbers and power.

I watched the green petals expand and grow in numbers out of control throughout the galaxy, sowing death and destruction in their wake, under a WAAAAGH! Getting bigger and bigger.

He saw on the other side of the galaxy another threat to come, innumerable hordes attracted by the light of his soul, whose sole purpose is to devour him to the astronomical in the galaxy just move to the next and repeat, as you did with the galaxy from which they came

I saw the remnants of a fallen race manipulated to mankind from the shadows, using themselves as a shield of flesh and their dark cousins treating the humans and humans of the galaxy as cattle and slaves, both arrogant with the first generation seeking their former glory , son inherently evil sin, but his arrogance makes them blind

the other, the twisted things and the activities that cause the fall of their civilization and its creation to a new and devastating twisted atrocity in the sea of souls, those in their hands, there is not a single one that asks for it, death and these sadists will tear off their skin, hang them in a heap and they will live for years, or until they decide.

He saw a group of machines omitted, a year of millions of years, at first it seemed that they only wanted to destroy life, but apparently their goals had become more varied

And the worst thing is to observe the cults dedicated to the deities of indiscriminate murder, putrefying plagues, excessive addictions and treacherous conspiracies, I watch them multiply and bring to the materium atrocious beings immaterial, beings conformed of flesh and pure evil, demons of horrible nightmares , all while listening to the laughter of the thirsty gods their most terrible enemies, The Dark Brothers.

And all while we look at his own species we become more and more an animal enclosed and consumed by fear and paranoia, being besieged on all sides, while he can not do anything at all, because his son destroyed his body and soul , without the possibility of repairing it, it can have a myriad of different things and can not use its powers to repair it, for more than 10 000 years, ten thousand years enduring immeasurable pain and mental stress, so great that they would displease normal human in the first second, trapped in a throne that although it kept her alive, it was also her prison.

It was horrible, it was terrible, it was terrible, it was hopeless.

This was, it was ... It was ... It was ...

It was too much

It was too much

It was too much! It was too much! It was too much! It was too much!

IT WAS TOO MUCH!

Dipper pins woke up with a start, his head felt very heavy and his body numb, he looked frantically at the sides, he did not know where he was or why, but the first thing he realized was that he was sitting.

- SEATED!? - Dipper shouted in his mind.

He was about to explode in a panic attack when he looked at his side and saw her.

There was her twin sister Mabel was sleeping and seeing her finally remembered.

He was sitting because he was on a bus that was going to Gravity Falls, a small town in Oregon where he would spend the summer holidays with his grandfather Stanford Pines.

He relaxed, he was glad that he was not sitting in that ... that ...

Why was he terrified long ago?
I did not know, that is, I knew that she was like that for that nightmare but I did not remember very well what happened in it, except for several fragments. I knew that one forgets almost everything that dreams to wake up, but this is a recurring nightmare and the hardest to remember that only a few fragments.

And he knew it was the same nightmare, because if he remembered two things: gold, much gold and what looked like a double-headed eagle; eagle with two heads, but that was not what caused the fear and that was what he did not remember.

He remembered the real situation he was in, he and his sister went to this small town to spend the summer with his great uncle, at first when his parents helped him and he was not very interested, it sounded boring, but since he began to have nightmare before the summer ...

He touched himself under his nose when he felt something wet, when he saw them to see what was blood and did not notice the golden shine that was a second in his eyes.

Maybe it's in this boring and small town of Gravity Falls would be what I needed, the peace of a town outside the bustle of the city, the bustle caused stress and stress caused many bad things between her a recurring nightmare, as he read by hay . In Gravity Falls you can also take this weight off and replace it with something less painful.

-Yes, this is what I need, I think while looking at the sign that welcomed him to his new home for next summer.

/ While in the forest /

A redhead girl of 16 years, with clear skin, with pink eyes that after the first black second and with freckles in many parts of her body, immediately 5 things VERY out of place

1) I was n***, it would not be so bad if it were not for the other things.

2) I was surrounded by a group of several people, and all were n*** and she was over some.

3) I could not remember how I got there or what happened last night, except some VERY defined scenes having a LOT of contact with other people, but nothing to help know how it was there.

4) I was in the forest, which was not only a part I did not know, but it was a very secluded part and inside.

All these points get worse when you see the detail number 5

5) It was not the first time this happened.

SHe decided that same moment to stop thinking, took his clothes and simply went home, praying with another deity that the attention that did not happen another incident all day.

Or for the rest of his life if it was possible.

/ Meanwhile in another place /

Suffering

Everything was suffering.

Suffering for the death of her husband and daughter, devoured by a monstrosity created long ago by the decadence and excesses of their other children.

Suffer for a period of time, at the hands of this aberration as his toy to then be released.

Suffering to be locked up at the hands of his liberator, who. It turned out to be an aberration of creation as horrible as the other, although not in the same way.

Suffer to consume the horrible, concoctions, putrefied, made from diseases and diseases, which would then spread over the innocent, that disgusting monster.

Suffer to see their children suffer for the sins of their ancestors' past, running the risk of being eaten by that living atrocity that their ancestors created, but equally blind for their arrogance.

Suffer for all the teachings given to the forgotten at best and bastardized in the worst of them, which is what happened most of the time.

Suffering, that is the word that summarizes your current situation and without apparent end.

Pacific Northwest woke up with a wet face.

-Other time- she said in a low voice, she touched her face, it was the tears, tears, or what remained of them in her hands in her lap and something felt something soft and hard touch. He checked to grab the object and saw two apparent, oval-looking jewels.

What is this? - She asked no one in particular in a low voice.

I look around and all the question about the gems in his hand that were relegated, another shot when he saw that his bed, and a large part of the wall near his bed, was covered in a beautiful variety of flowers, fruits and another variety of plant life.

This is the beginning of summer in Gravity Fall, a summer full of mysteries and many other things, beyond the predestinable.

Enjoy!