for An Unbreakable Connection5/3/2018 c1 
27Turnabout Writer
Heartbreaking, but beautifully written! I especially love how you depicted Roxas, Xion, and Ventus in Sora’s heart, and the nod to Xion’s dialogue in KH3D, as well as referencing Roxas’s hurt from KH Coded (and adding in about Xion's hurt as well).
27Turnabout WriterHeartbreaking, but beautifully written! I especially love how you depicted Roxas, Xion, and Ventus in Sora’s heart, and the nod to Xion’s dialogue in KH3D, as well as referencing Roxas’s hurt from KH Coded (and adding in about Xion's hurt as well).