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6/24 c50 R reyes
so pilot, what kind of gundam will amuro will get the atlas or the Alex or a unit from the other time line from the 80 or unit 7..
that will be cool
6/23 c50 MachineOmega
I am looking forward to how you proceed with this story and have it flow into a mass effect crossover! Hopefully Sayla is able to reach char but she most likely will fail, and a lot of people with either due to suffer. Hopefully we get to see the gundam Alex, mostly because I love that gundam to bits and really just want some scenes with it in action. Have a good day, looking forward to the next chapter!
6/23 c9 11Moonreaper666
Kycilla's casualties shouldn't be that light. It should be over 100 Zeon Mobile Suits, 12 Musais, 5 Chivays and one destroyed Gwazine. Kowen's forces has lots of AIs, EXAAMS, a few ships with anti-beam coating, lots of superior Mobile Suits and countless veterans while Kycilla only has conscripts mostly piloting Zaku-IIs and Zaku-Is

The Federation will implement a generational punishment program on Side 3's population. For ONE HUNDRED GENERATIONS:

-Thrice as many taxes to pay
-No government benefits
-Two child only policy
-Harsher sentences for any crimes committed
-No access to certain jobs
-All Side 3 businesses must make regular 'donations' to the charity fund for Federation child orphans
-Labor laws non-existent in Side 3. Federation companies can forced children to work just like in the 1800s
-Side 3 must pay for the rebuilding of the Federation as well as Universal Basic Income for EF citizens
-Any riots, peaceful protest or 'hate speech' against the Federation or its citizens will be treated as terrorism
-Side 3 citizens can't marry or have kids with EF people unless authorized by the EF government

(The punishments get worse every time Side 3 terrorists/Zeon Remnants do something. The EF does reprisal killings, 20 Side 3 citizens shot for every EF citizen killed in Stardust and the Axis insurgency)

Side 3 should end up like Mars and the colonies from IBO, if not worse, and they can't/shouldn't rebel as they should feel lucky they are still alive and feel that they deserve to be punished for the LARGEST GENOCIDE IN HUMAN HISTORY. They are responsible for wiping out over half of humanity. They are lucky the Federation doesn't wipe them all out with Nukes after A Baou Qu as the EF has every right to do it and the vast majority of EF citizens will support it. The Soviet Union only lost TEN PERCENT of its population during WW2!

(If the EF knew the events of F91, Victory, Reconguista and Turn A would have happen they would have exterminated Zeon/Side 3 after Solomon!)

I don't get Spacenoid hate but the EF should be bursting at the seems with hate for Side 3 for centuries to come. Side 3 should be punished for Stardust and Axis. The Titans should be focusing all of their oppressive operations on Side 3, cause virtually no one within the Federation military or public will give a shit. The Moore Brotherhood should be hardcore members of the Titans

I am surprised the conscription age is 15, it should have been 12. Shouldn't it cost Zeon more to implement the experimental amputee controls in their Mobile Suits, resulting in cutbacks in either ships, good mobile suits or other things?

I will call BS if these amputees fight better than either AIs or veterans or EXAAM users since they will be using inferior Doms and Gelgoogs compared to the GM Commands

Um, is Kycilla crazy? Where the hell is Zeon which is much more resource-starved in your story compared to Canon going to have the tools and time to make a better MS than the Gelgoog!? Zeon should be mass producing Zakus, Gattle fighters and Musais!

How many veteran pilots does Zeon still have? Between AIs, better Federation MS and all the other extra advantages the Alternate EF has Zeon should be down to just ten veterans throughout its entire army. Many Zeon conscripts will be piloting Zaku-Is, Gattle spacefighters and poorly rushed Musais. The vast majority of A Baou Qu defenders should be very young ill-trained conscripts piloting outdated and ill-maintained equipment.

Ramba noticed just how crappy Zeon's logistic and maintenance was back on Earth. It should be much worse now

How you should do A Baou Qu is divide the battle into three chapters, Rashamon style. Zeon has conscripted and strip bare its economy, population and industry to have the Zeon defenders outnumber the Federation 30-1, despite the fact that Revil’s forces are much bigger than in Canon. But it won’t matter

First chapter has Solar Flare being fired first thanks to AI, taking out EIGHTY PERCENT of A Baou Qu’s defenders AS WELL AS Solar Ray! Amuro then charges ahead of the very massive Federation force and straight into the center of the Zeon force, where their best soldiers are at. The White Devil takes out over a hundred Zakus, thirteen Musais and four Chivays just in the first minute!

That is when Amuro faces of against the best of Zeon. All 40 Gelgoogs, 300 Doms as well as elite pilots such as Brenev Auggs, Johnny Ridden, Char and Haman’s dark skin second-in command in Canon! By the end of the battle, Amuro gets over 700 MS kills and 33 ship kills!

Second Chapter begins right after Solar Flare is fired but the POVs of all the other Federation characters for their time to shine! Revil, Wakkein, Tianem, White Base, Moore Brotherhood, Agar, Heinz Baer, Lydo Wolf and many more get their own battle scenes, inflicting damage on Zeon. Ryu and Sleggar each get forty MS kills!

Third Chapter is split between Federation and Zeon viewpoints. Jamitov and Yazan as well as the Moore Brotherhood get their scenes as the Federation angrilly and cruelly slaughters all surrendering Zeon soldiers and civilians with glee. Kycilla and Gihren are both killed by Amuro while a portion of the Delaz fleet leaves the battle alive

Epilogue has Amuro getting his own squad, taking orders directly from Revil. Jamitov, Yazan and the Moore Brotherhood destroy a Side 3 merchant fleet containing food and water, resulting in a Side 3 colony facing starvation. Jamitov pins the blame on Axis and the Delaz fleet

I really hope that Amuro's new Gundam is superior in all aspect to the Full Armor MK-II, no bullshit flaw. At this point, Amuro's skill, war experience, Mobile Suit and Newtype power are all superior to what Char has. Amuro can take on ALL of Zeon's veterans at A Baou Qu and not break a sweat. Amuro doesn't need Vega anymore

That is very bad because Amuro is the better pilot, tactician and Newtype than Char. In CCA, Char's Sazabi is superior to the Nu-Gundam and Amuro divided his attention between fighting Char and destroying Axis. Yet Char LOST DECISIVELY!
6/23 c50 Moonreaper666
There is no way Kycilla's casualties should be that light. It should be over 100 Zeon Mobile Suits, 12 Musais, 5 Chivays and one destroyed Gwazine. Kowen's forces has lots of AIs, EXAAMS, a few ships with anti-beam coating, lots of superior Mobile Suits and countless veterans while Kycilla only has conscripts mostly piloting Zaku-IIs and Zaku-Is

The Federation will implement a generational punishment program on Side 3's population. For ONE HUNDRED GENERATIONS:

-Thrice as many taxes to pay
-No government benefits
-Two child only policy
-Harsher sentences for any crimes committed
-No access to certain jobs
-All Side 3 businesses must make regular 'donations' to the charity fund for Federation child orphans
-Labor laws non-existent in Side 3. Federation companies can forced children to work just like in the 1800s
-Side 3 must pay for the rebuilding of the Federation as well as Universal Basic Income for EF citizens
-Any riots, peaceful protest or 'hate speech' against the Federation or its citizens will be treated as terrorism
-Side 3 citizens can't marry or have kids with EF people unless authorized by the EF government

(The punishments get worse every time Side 3 terrorists/Zeon Remnants do something. The EF does reprisal killings, 20 Side 3 citizens shot for every EF citizen killed in Stardust and the Axis insurgency)

Side 3 should end up like Mars and the colonies from IBO, if not worse, and they can't/shouldn't rebel as they should feel lucky they are still alive and feel that they deserve to be punished for the LARGEST GENOCIDE IN HUMAN HISTORY. They are responsible for wiping out over half of humanity. They are lucky the Federation doesn't wipe them all out with Nukes after A Baou Qu as the EF has every right to do it and the vast majority of EF citizens will support it. The Soviet Union only lost TEN PERCENT of its population during WW2!

(If the EF knew the events of F91, Victory, Reconguista and Turn A would have happen they would have exterminated Zeon/Side 3 after Solomon!)

I don't get Spacenoid hate but the EF should be bursting at the seems with hate for Side 3 for centuries to come. Side 3 should be punished for Stardust and Axis. The Titans should be focusing all of their oppressive operations on Side 3, cause virtually no one within the Federation military or public will give a shit. The Moore Brotherhood should be hardcore members of the Titans

I am surprised the conscription age is 15, it should have been 12. Shouldn't it cost Zeon more to implement the experimental amputee controls in their Mobile Suits, resulting in cutbacks in either ships, good mobile suits or other things?

I will call BS if these amputees fight better than either AIs or veterans or EXAAM users since they will be using inferior Doms and Gelgoogs compared to the GM Commands

Um, is Kycilla crazy? Where the hell is Zeon which is much more resource-starved in your story compared to Canon going to have the tools and time to make a better MS than the Gelgoog!? Zeon should be mass producing Zakus, Gattle fighters and Musais!

How many veteran pilots does Zeon still have? Between AIs, better Federation MS and all the other extra advantages the Alternate EF has Zeon should be down to just ten veterans throughout its entire army. Many Zeon conscripts will be piloting Zaku-Is, Gattle spacefighters and poorly rushed Musais. The vast majority of A Baou Qu defenders should be very young ill-trained conscripts piloting outdated and ill-maintained equipment.

Ramba noticed just how crappy Zeon's logistic and maintenance was back on Earth. It should be much worse now

How you should do A Baou Qu is divide the battle into three chapters, Rashamon style. Zeon has conscripted and strip bare its economy, population and industry to have the Zeon defenders outnumber the Federation 30-1, despite the fact that Revil’s forces are much bigger than in Canon. But it won’t matter

First chapter has Solar Flare being fired first thanks to AI, taking out EIGHTY PERCENT of A Baou Qu’s defenders AS WELL AS Solar Ray! Amuro then charges ahead of the very massive Federation force and straight into the center of the Zeon force, where their best soldiers are at. The White Devil takes out over a hundred Zakus, thirteen Musais and four Chivays just in the first minute!

That is when Amuro faces of against the best of Zeon. All 40 Gelgoogs, 300 Doms as well as elite pilots such as Brenev Auggs, Johnny Ridden, Char and Haman’s dark skin second-in command in Canon! By the end of the battle, Amuro gets over 700 MS kills and 33 ship kills!

Second Chapter begins right after Solar Flare is fired but the POVs of all the other Federation characters for their time to shine! Revil, Wakkein, Tianem, White Base, Moore Brotherhood, Agar, Heinz Baer, Lydo Wolf and many more get their own battle scenes, inflicting damage on Zeon. Ryu and Sleggar each get forty MS kills!

Third Chapter is split between Federation and Zeon viewpoints. Jamitov and Yazan as well as the Moore Brotherhood get their scenes as the Federation angrilly and cruelly slaughters all surrendering Zeon soldiers and civilians with glee. Kycilla and Gihren are both killed by Amuro while a portion of the Delaz fleet leaves the battle alive

Epilogue has Amuro getting his own squad, taking orders directly from Revil. Jamitov, Yazan and the Moore Brotherhood destroy a Side 3 merchant fleet containing food and water, resulting in a Side 3 colony facing starvation. Jamitov pins the blame on Axis and the Delaz fleet

I really hope that Amuro's new Gundam is superior in all aspect to the Full Armor MK-II, no bullshit flaw. At this point, Amuro's skill, war experience, Mobile Suit and Newtype power are all superior to what Char has. Amuro can take on ALL of Zeon's veterans at A Baou Qu and not break a sweat. Amuro doesn't need Vega anymore

That is very bad because Amuro is the better pilot, tactician and Newtype than Char. In CCA, Char's Sazabi is superior to the Nu-Gundam and Amuro divided his attention between fighting Char and destroying Axis. Yet Char LOST DECISIVELY!
6/22 c50 4bladewolfzic
good chapter
6/22 c50 R reyes
vengeance is truly a horrible poisoning that destroys you and those around ya... and make you let ge of your family jt was to see the sisters becoming like that all for vengeance i wonder what they will do when they find out who kill there dad and char i hope he comes back from his dark path but people don't know what the future holds take care out there
on Saturday i saw what kind of horrible things people can do my neighbor is a senior who i known since i was a kid he always help those my mom his kids. hell he even help us when maria hit us yeah i from Puerto Rico almost 2 year with no power and we have to help each other here .. we have no power when we needed he help us with his power plant or a small spring of water too. he live on his home and me and my mom brings him food when he needs... one of his son the eldest did some thing bad with none of his family knowing none were happy about it not me nor mom she was in tears and he did such thing on the day before father's day if that is not evil i dint know what is he dint hurt him no but i think some of you put 2 by 2 together yeah his grandson was piss me too along with my mom's friend who she had know for years
6/22 c50 4Dragon lord Syed 101
Good chapter Char was interesting also ah yes Zeon has too many wonder weapons for their own good also the Alex was hinted at Sayla is going to tell some truths and Armuo hates Jazz that ain’t cool at all and Io has meets a red head we all know
6/22 c50 RoyalTwinFangs
Very nice chapter. Will Char get the Perfect Zeong or the Zeong High Mobility Type? The Zeong HMT would fit his fighting style more the Perfect Zeong, high speed hard hitting attacks.

Those two OCs are going to get the Dolmel right? To fight against Kai and Hayato so that Amuro and Char can have their duel. They may be new and more powerful but they are piloted by rookies against what are now harden veterans. They are going to die.

If Amuro spare Char then when he does all of those stuff later int he timeline, it's going to haunt him and Sayla in the end. Millions dead with another successful colony drop and more Neo Zeon Wars. I hope that you would show us guilt that they would have. Maybe even having their love ones getting killed because the decision to spare Char's life, would that be fun?

So will the Thoroughbrad team find the Zeon Solar Ray and prevent it from firing which would save more Federation lives?

Also happy fifth chapter and over four hundred thousand words. And here to more coming.
6/22 c50 1TheEmeraldMage
Sayla getting that vision of events that will soon happen is a pretty good indication on what will happen between Amuro and Char. Speaking of, Amuro not liking jazz music is a shame because when NOT blasted through the air, it is not bad. But apart from the whole hilariousness that is the jazz scenes, it was nice to see Amuro and Io speaking more with lo actually thanking Amuro for saving him. Also the jock federation pilot did have a point we do need some more saints especially during the one year war because my God a lot of people died. Erika's scenes with her sister were very heartbreaking even though I only know Erika due to how you described her and that the Narrative movie is known as that one Gundam movie were time traveling semi god Gundams exist for some reason. So far your version of this character makes sense and sound like she's more interesting here then she is in the actual movie. It does seem like we're getting close to how the original TV series will end especially if Char is getting his Zeong at this point. Not to mention the fact that Kyscrilla is getting more pissed at her brother, meaning a certain scene will happen. And before I forget, Sayla remembering stuff that happened with her reminded me of oh yeah when your brother left you, got someone who had the name Char, died in a scapegoat attempt and also indirectly killing another person who knew his real name. Yeah he was not a good person back then until he was in Zeta Gundam...until Char's Counterattack happened and he became an idiot. Ranting about certain things aside this was still a pretty solid chapter and I definitely await the next one. Stay healthy and safe!
6/22 c50 7RedRat8
Aye, also it's a shame that neither Amuro and Chan are big on Jazz, but at least they listened and respected Io's wish, and now Io and Bianca finally met each other and are having Jazz Sessions, yeah! I also can't help but note that when Amuro talked to Io, he seemed to have been bringing out the best in Io bit by bit, I assume you took my idea of each Newtype having a different effect and used your idea for what Amuro's Newtype power could be to affect Io. I can't help but think, that kind of power could be the most amazing of Newtype powers in my opinion, because it would surely get Amuro Allies no matter what. Also glad to see that Erika has her head screwed on straight unlike her sister, which was a shame since she was sensible in Gundam Narrative
6/22 c50 justinq719
oh crap that right's, Amuro never met Lalah in this story!
6/18 c49 R reyes
also dude almost 50 chapters on this story got to be a great achievement for that man try something fun or omake for funny moments in the story or a small preview of the cross over you say you would of mass effect for it to celebrate of 50 of chapters you did stay safe out there man
6/17 c49 R reyes
a little r&r for everyone for a few days so the moor brotherhood get to meet the white base crew and the others maybe join them so will ghiren use the colony laser will revil and his fleet will die along with some of the other admirals please no
6/17 c49 11Moonreaper666
Something that feels odd about your story are the numbers. For instance having 70-80 Zeon MS attack Jaburo is small compared to the 300 Zeon MS that canonically fought at Odessa. Another instance is the number of Zeon and Federation ships at the start of the OYW, hundreds vs over 1 thousand. I feel it should have been tens of thousands of ships on both sides and the indiscriminate use of nukes wiping out more than half of both fleets

Um, Kycilla just suicided the Granada fleet against the Federation. She is deluded to think her fleet has even a sliver of a chance of surviving. Her fleet would last 20 minutes tops and then some of those merchant ships would be mercilesy slaughtered

I think members of the Moore Brotherhood and those that would later become hardcore Titans should use the EXAAM system at A Baou Qu and slaughter Zeon soldiers and civilians. Find it strange the MB did not execute Zeon soldiers surrendering at the Thunderbolt sector

A Baou Qu should have over a hundred million Zeon refugees running away from the EF as they commit 'minor' war crimes (Like blowing up a mining asteroid with Zeon miners in it. Zeon civilian ships gunned down without remorse which you haven't shown or mention. Thanks to AI and the massive and quick shift in the balance of power, the EF shoukd commit much more war crimes against Side 3 as they are clearly winning)

(And the war crimes escalate once in Stardust and twice when Axis shows its ugly head)

I really can't see the Federation not going full-blown blood rage frenzy at A Baou Qu. Between Solar Ray and the cowardice of Delaz the EF is going to turn that asteroid into a mass grave for tens of millions of Zeon soldiers and civilians

Future Gundams, including the new one Amuro is going to use at A Baou Qu, shouldn't use the Core Booster to save cost and time. They should be a little smaller with more powerful nuclear cores, a small step progressing to the Miniature MS of F91. Maybe Amuro's new Gundam should have the I-field of the Big Zam and have reloadable Beam Rifles that can hit targets much farther away in addition to better speed and agility

When was the first batch of AI deployed onto the battlefield and how many on Earth or in space? How much would an AI increase the kill ratio and number of battles the basic GM and its pilot survive?

If you answer a lot to both questions then you understand my confusion. Let's say hypothetically a GM survives its first battle thanks to its AI and gets two more Zaku kills in addition to the first kill the pilot gets without AI. This GM with AI now participates in 50 more battles, mostly skirmishes, on Earth and claims 450 Zeon MS kills as well as hundreds of Zeon tanks and jets. The pilot and AI also destroys 6 Zeon ships and an additional 220 MS. Just one AI killed more than a hundred thousand Zeon soldiers and over SIX HUNDRED Mobile Suits!

Will every AI from the first batch survive the OYW? No, but the majority will and even with a standard GM starting with an inexperience pilot each of them will inflict more destruction than Char (Red Comet killed 400 Federation MS in Canon) and there is no way Zeon would be able to replace that many losses just to make it to Odessa!

And that is just the first batch of AI. Zeon would have run out of veteran pilots within a week and would be forced to have 12 year olds pilot Zakus in two! Char and Ramba Ral struggled against AI and the vast majority of Zeon veterans are below their level. It gets worse when AIs are given to EF veterans that pilot Guncannons, GM Commands or Sniper IIs as they would outright slaughter entire groups of veteran Gelgoogs with very minimal casualties. Zeon would be losing 6/7ths of its population by the time of Jaburo!

Oh, a Salamis cruiser piloted only by AI and having anti-beam coating should be able to take out two Gwazines. Surprised that anti-beam coating on Salamis cruisers have only been used once in your story by Wakkien. A single AI-controlled Salamis with the coating would have crippled Char's group in their first convoy raid

Finding it very hard to picture Zeon Remnants as anything else but frightened depopulated children. Side 3 teenagers piloting Zaku-Is slaughtered en masse by a few GM Command IIs with upgraded AIs and those GMs go to Side 3 and then gassed a colony for support the remnants
6/16 c49 4AccelBreaker
Oh boy...if one full armor gundam was bad in the thunderbolt sector...now there's two...

Yup, the Living Dead Division is now screwed.
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