
1/6/2021 c6 RedRoseAbsolute
the character of the characters are well represented.
please continue you writing is great
the character of the characters are well represented.
please continue you writing is great
12/21/2018 c6 Kaamokset
Please keep writing!
This is honestly so good and I want to read more (but no pressure, seriously).
Now Esme's a vampire it's time for the super-fluff between her and Carlisle so please will you keep going?
*Puppy eyes*
I don't want to be pushy, though. This is just my way of showing support.
Have a nice day!
Please keep writing!
This is honestly so good and I want to read more (but no pressure, seriously).
Now Esme's a vampire it's time for the super-fluff between her and Carlisle so please will you keep going?
*Puppy eyes*
I don't want to be pushy, though. This is just my way of showing support.
Have a nice day!
10/29/2018 c5 Patriciadiane
Esme’s strong beliefs are part of what makes her so special and her kindness is enviable.
Edward’s a bleh!
Esme’s love for Carlisle is so sweet.
Esme’s strong beliefs are part of what makes her so special and her kindness is enviable.
Edward’s a bleh!
Esme’s love for Carlisle is so sweet.
10/29/2018 c1 Patriciadiane
What a lovely beginning! Esme and Carlisle are such a wonderful couple!
I’m in...
Thank you
What a lovely beginning! Esme and Carlisle are such a wonderful couple!
I’m in...
Thank you
10/17/2018 c6
2YourAlphaWolf
The formatting on the chapter is messed up and no words! Just a head up! It’s a bunch of randomness

The formatting on the chapter is messed up and no words! Just a head up! It’s a bunch of randomness
9/25/2018 c5 Zbop
I'm hurt. You left me hanging. I TRUSTED YOU GODDAMNIT!
I'm hurt. You left me hanging. I TRUSTED YOU GODDAMNIT!
7/26/2018 c5 dasiejo
It would be nice to see when renesmee is born into the story more interaction between grandparent and child , and how esma takes the role of mother to Carlisle children and interaction with other people in that role , sticking up for them discipline them affection and hanging out , or when the questions from the lil red head comes up because she has no memory of her parents or about being human what was it like and falls in to a vampire depression .How she handles all the parts of her every day life
It would be nice to see when renesmee is born into the story more interaction between grandparent and child , and how esma takes the role of mother to Carlisle children and interaction with other people in that role , sticking up for them discipline them affection and hanging out , or when the questions from the lil red head comes up because she has no memory of her parents or about being human what was it like and falls in to a vampire depression .How she handles all the parts of her every day life
6/18/2018 c5 Corinna
Hello! I missed this story so much.
I love the way you are portraying the characters! So good you are back!
Update soon, hope everything is okay at home! Good luck!
Hello! I missed this story so much.
I love the way you are portraying the characters! So good you are back!
Update soon, hope everything is okay at home! Good luck!
6/12/2018 c1 Guest
love this story so far
love this story so far
2/15/2018 c4 Guest
love love this story. I always wondered how they met and the dynamics of the first love! Awesome job! Waiting for more!
love love this story. I always wondered how they met and the dynamics of the first love! Awesome job! Waiting for more!