8/15/2019 c8 Spinalittleglow
The dancing scene was so cute! And admittedly so was Krum asking a Hermione to go to the ball with him. Please update soon!
The dancing scene was so cute! And admittedly so was Krum asking a Hermione to go to the ball with him. Please update soon!
1/14/2019 c8 leonix2009
Wow that was a great chapter. I enjoyed it very much. Hermione has date for ball and she got dancing lessons from Cedric. Let's see what happens next. Thanks for the update. I enjoyed it very much.
Wow that was a great chapter. I enjoyed it very much. Hermione has date for ball and she got dancing lessons from Cedric. Let's see what happens next. Thanks for the update. I enjoyed it very much.
6/29/2018 c7 Guest
I just found your story and I have really enjoyed it and look forward to more chapters
I just found your story and I have really enjoyed it and look forward to more chapters
6/27/2018 c7 leonix2009
Oh my that was brilliant
Hermione and Harry were perfect
First task is completed that's good
Thanks for the update
I enjoyed it very much
I hope to see you soon with next chapter
Oh my that was brilliant
Hermione and Harry were perfect
First task is completed that's good
Thanks for the update
I enjoyed it very much
I hope to see you soon with next chapter
6/26/2018 c3 3alix33
“brainwashing” should be one word.
“pure-blood” should be hyphenated.
As should “muggle-borns”.
I liked Hermione and Cedric’s whole conversation a lot. And that he took into account that Hermione is muggle-born.
“brainwashing” should be one word.
“pure-blood” should be hyphenated.
As should “muggle-borns”.
I liked Hermione and Cedric’s whole conversation a lot. And that he took into account that Hermione is muggle-born.
6/26/2018 c1 alix33
I’d honestly much rather Hermione fancied the IMO very yummy looking Cedric Diggory than the IMO beyond odious Ron Weasley as per canon.
“girls’ tent” (which means the tent in which more than one girl will sleep), not “girl’s tent” (which means the tent in which only one girl will sleep).
I’d honestly much rather Hermione fancied the IMO very yummy looking Cedric Diggory than the IMO beyond odious Ron Weasley as per canon.
“girls’ tent” (which means the tent in which more than one girl will sleep), not “girl’s tent” (which means the tent in which only one girl will sleep).
6/12/2018 c6 zombiekins5948
they better stop making fun of Hermione after her teeth got fixed. hopefully the prophet doesn't make hermione seem like a slut because she is not one.
they better stop making fun of Hermione after her teeth got fixed. hopefully the prophet doesn't make hermione seem like a slut because she is not one.
6/5/2018 c6 Guest
Maybe Hermione could ask Harry to become Dobby's master? Or have Dobby bond with Sorius? Either way, then Dobby would have his magic stronger and Sirius wouldn't have to live off of rats in the cave by Hogsmeade! And maybe he could be convinced to take on Winky too? Or Mrs. Weasley could?
Maybe Hermione could ask Harry to become Dobby's master? Or have Dobby bond with Sorius? Either way, then Dobby would have his magic stronger and Sirius wouldn't have to live off of rats in the cave by Hogsmeade! And maybe he could be convinced to take on Winky too? Or Mrs. Weasley could?
6/3/2018 c6 leonix2009
Wow that was really a great chapter
I am glad Harry has hermione with him
I always thought that Snape was really cruel there
He as a teacher should have atleast taken points from Slytherins but he didn't
Thanks for the update
I enjoyed it very much
I hope to see you soon with next chapter
Wow that was really a great chapter
I am glad Harry has hermione with him
I always thought that Snape was really cruel there
He as a teacher should have atleast taken points from Slytherins but he didn't
Thanks for the update
I enjoyed it very much
I hope to see you soon with next chapter
4/7/2018 c5 1mavalenovaninagavi
This is really good so far, I like how she’s started to take notice if Cedric and likewise. Excited for when you update this again!
This is really good so far, I like how she’s started to take notice if Cedric and likewise. Excited for when you update this again!
3/18/2018 c5 leonix2009
Well Harry's name got picked
That was a great chapter
I enjoyed it very much
Thanks for the update
I hope to see you soon with next chapter
Well Harry's name got picked
That was a great chapter
I enjoyed it very much
Thanks for the update
I hope to see you soon with next chapter