for dressed up like a lovely day9/3/2019 c1 Back - In - The - Day
This was great! I love Yu/Kei smut. If you have more ideas from 15 years ago you should go for it!
This was great! I love Yu/Kei smut. If you have more ideas from 15 years ago you should go for it!
7/30/2018 c1 
5Infynit
Thought I'd make your day.
Nothing like some passionate lovemaking, huh?
Cheers.
5InfynitThought I'd make your day.
Nothing like some passionate lovemaking, huh?
Cheers.
6/10/2018 c1 ainnanorthstar
Solid idea. I totally buy the premise that an older Yusuke would get turned on by an older Keiko in a sexy school uniform. ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Also their bickering dynamic is not lost here, even as they are definitely older: something has changed, mellowed down, even, but the essence of who they are as a couple is still there.
And while you write the sexy parts quite lyrically and tastefully, my favorite part is how you put their entire middle-school relationship into the paragraphs about how Yusuke "saw he in many ways at once." That was just spot-on, and perfect.
Solid idea. I totally buy the premise that an older Yusuke would get turned on by an older Keiko in a sexy school uniform. ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Also their bickering dynamic is not lost here, even as they are definitely older: something has changed, mellowed down, even, but the essence of who they are as a couple is still there.
And while you write the sexy parts quite lyrically and tastefully, my favorite part is how you put their entire middle-school relationship into the paragraphs about how Yusuke "saw he in many ways at once." That was just spot-on, and perfect.
2/17/2018 c1 1Mokuren77
Great as always! I always love reading how you portray Yusuke and Keiko. Good work!
1Mokuren77Great as always! I always love reading how you portray Yusuke and Keiko. Good work!
2/7/2018 c1 8Sunmoon Lancaster
Yes, writing is so hard. I really liked this one, Yusuke can be so desperate XD. When inspiration comes, keep writing and I'll read review.
8Sunmoon LancasterYes, writing is so hard. I really liked this one, Yusuke can be so desperate XD. When inspiration comes, keep writing and I'll read review.