for Il Miko di Cielo11/19/2018 c5 Guest
At least warn people at the summary if it was gonna be a SI-OC. Not many people like self inserts. Especially badly written ones.
At least warn people at the summary if it was gonna be a SI-OC. Not many people like self inserts. Especially badly written ones.
10/31/2018 c6 ACasualHuman
I can't remember much of the story as of right now, but if I do remember *correctly* I was really confused on what was happening.
I'll stay and wait for the revision.
But,,, even so, as the manners beaten into me command me to do so I'm going to have to say: Thank you for the update, I hope that these still will continue to come out
I can't remember much of the story as of right now, but if I do remember *correctly* I was really confused on what was happening.
I'll stay and wait for the revision.
But,,, even so, as the manners beaten into me command me to do so I'm going to have to say: Thank you for the update, I hope that these still will continue to come out
10/31/2018 c6 bloodshound
I hope your muses cooperate enough for an update sooner rather than later. So far, this has been utterly fascinating.
I hope your muses cooperate enough for an update sooner rather than later. So far, this has been utterly fascinating.
10/30/2018 c6 
3ProcrastinatorC
Well I really pity you. In your place I would've cried for weeks and planned my brother's tortu-I mean death and more. What's done is done so hope you can get back up.
3ProcrastinatorCWell I really pity you. In your place I would've cried for weeks and planned my brother's tortu-I mean death and more. What's done is done so hope you can get back up.
7/18/2018 c5 ACasualHuman
Although this probably isnt the correct setting, i tend to be sadistic with sadistic people so i enjoy reading storys were Reborn is in a less-than-pleasing position and is lacking info. I. f* . it.
Also. How do polls work? *tilts head innocently*
Please continue to update this piece of art called a fanfic!
Although this probably isnt the correct setting, i tend to be sadistic with sadistic people so i enjoy reading storys were Reborn is in a less-than-pleasing position and is lacking info. I. f* . it.
Also. How do polls work? *tilts head innocently*
Please continue to update this piece of art called a fanfic!
6/27/2018 c1 ProTaggingProperly
Miko? I'm no expert in Japanese, but does it mean Tsuna is a female? Does it pertain to Tsuna or someone else? An SI (totally lame if it does)? Fem-Tsuna (also lame)?
Miko? I'm no expert in Japanese, but does it mean Tsuna is a female? Does it pertain to Tsuna or someone else? An SI (totally lame if it does)? Fem-Tsuna (also lame)?
3/22/2018 c5 CallmeCrazylol
If Fon being an adult again is permanent think of how fast the other Arcobaleno would come...
If Fon being an adult again is permanent think of how fast the other Arcobaleno would come...
3/14/2018 c5 1Shiho-Akemi
Xanxus! The truth is that instead of imagining Tsu I imagine Xanx xD
Can not visit Xanx in some dream? or trip? or whatever it is called?
1Shiho-AkemiXanxus! The truth is that instead of imagining Tsu I imagine Xanx xD
Can not visit Xanx in some dream? or trip? or whatever it is called?
2/28/2018 c1 lilith20047
This is really good I love it is this part of natsumi's power cause If it is its cool \o/
This is really good I love it is this part of natsumi's power cause If it is its cool \o/
2/22/2018 c4 AshVu
Lol. I guess this story is not about Tsuna but about your Mary-Sue Nsumit.
Lol. I guess this story is not about Tsuna but about your Mary-Sue Nsumit.
2/22/2018 c3 AshVu
These OCs are really boring. :( I can't wait to get to the main story, if it exists.
These OCs are really boring. :( I can't wait to get to the main story, if it exists.