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7/18/2018 c1 19lovleydragonfly
Okay so I love the idea! It is a bit hard to read, but have you considered looking for a beta? I do see a few mistakes but if you find a beta they can definitely help with small stuff and help the story flow! I hope I see more soon!
6/28/2018 c1 Readmytulips
The basic plot is really good I enjoyed it. However this really jumped around, I'm really confused about a lot of the background for the pairings and why ieshitsu had those things done to tsuna. Also why was knuckle the traitor? If the arcobeleno are arcobeleno why were they not babies? Why was kawahira only known as kawahira when he's also checkerface? I'm so confused because there isn't a lot of background information.

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