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2/16/2018 c1 15CAPJHMPAgirl
This was a very cute idea for your word! I enjoyed reading your story. I'm definitely curious to know who the mysterious boy was. Even though this piece was short, you managed to give each of the three bachelorettes enough spotlight to give them a cute scene and accurately portray them.
2/12/2018 c1 15Halidom
This was sweet.

I haven't played (or ever bought, not going to lie) this game yet,
But the characterization you gave was enough to ground the story for me, and I enjoyed this little piece. Though I'm not going to lie when I say I'm picturing a purple eyed Cole Sprouse as Jughead Jones for some reason.
2/11/2018 c1 38Durotos
Well, for such a short story, this one made me think quite a bit.

This story almost has a fantasy/mystical feel to it. I'm picturing this mystery man as someone with a sort of secret plan in the works, with the ability to hypnotize/charm people with his eyes and smile. Now I want to know what he was delivering and if the package and letter are related somehow. This would be really cool if you expanded it into a fantasy story.

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