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2/15/2018 c1 Sasha Clarkson
Brilliant Sarah - I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. I like the humanisation of Vernon - not "nice", but much less a cardboard cut-out villian - as with Draco, Lucius, Crebbe & Goyle.

Also, although this is not a comedy, I laughed repeatedly through reading it - especially at the interactions between Harry and Severus.

Poor Ron ...
2/15/2018 c4 6Queen of the Jungle
Wow! What a finish! Good on Draco!
2/15/2018 c3 Queen of the Jungle
Dancing ballerina suits of armour? Oh dear!
2/15/2018 c2 Queen of the Jungle
Pranking Lucius again? Your favourite hobby! And two DADA teachers down in less than a year? Harry works fast!
2/15/2018 c4 Guest
This is hilarious.
2/14/2018 c1 Queen of the Jungle
This is terrific!
2/14/2018 c4 15Saissa
Apart from the somewhat abrupt ending, and the chapters getting shorter, this was a brilliant story!
2/14/2018 c4 carick of hunter moon
good fun ...
2/14/2018 c1 carick of hunter moon
all told a very fun bashing? story start which works and is written in such a way to hold the reader intrest

Some interesting write up about the Harry Potter, can be found on the profile's of muggledad, gphoenix51, ARedHair, distorted-me, sprinter1988 & Kalen Darkmoon all are well worth look at.

Story rec
Black Sun Rising By: Mortaegus
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2/13/2018 c4 sunsethill
It was fun giving Millie a chance to shine. I also loved when one of Draco's bookends declared he wanted to marry Hermione, but then decided he couldn't figure her out enough to know what he was admiring. And Dobby rocked appropriating Dumbledore's marshmallows to comfort Millie. I also enjoy it when Vernon is an actual, thinking competent business man. Fast, but fun.
2/13/2018 c4 49Polydicta
Heh ... that was one FUN ride!

My only complaint is that Ron wasn't eaten by the thestrals.

Maybe next time ;)
2/13/2018 c4 t42n24t2
I tore through all four chapters! What a ride! You write the most interesting Snape and Potter relationships, and I do like seeing the Dursleys as a positive influence. Thank you!
2/13/2018 c1 ThePhoenixandtheDragon
Another perfect AU story. Any chance you will take back up a young Severus storyline and make him as sharp witted and tongued as this Harry?
2/13/2018 c4 weyrleader69
Fantastic!
2/13/2018 c4 DebiO
Last chapter not quite as good as the preceding three, but not bad. Things just wrapped up to quickly. Dumbles died in prison, what happened to McGonagall? Love the idea of Lucius with a helicopter. Major complaint? the story is over. Thanks for writing a great tale. Now 4:00 AM, may get some sleep after all.
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