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2/14/2018 c4 carick of hunter moon
good fun ...
2/14/2018 c1 carick of hunter moon
all told a very fun bashing? story start which works and is written in such a way to hold the reader intrest

Some interesting write up about the Harry Potter, can be found on the profile's of muggledad, gphoenix51, ARedHair, distorted-me, sprinter1988 & Kalen Darkmoon all are well worth look at.

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2/13/2018 c4 sunsethill
It was fun giving Millie a chance to shine. I also loved when one of Draco's bookends declared he wanted to marry Hermione, but then decided he couldn't figure her out enough to know what he was admiring. And Dobby rocked appropriating Dumbledore's marshmallows to comfort Millie. I also enjoy it when Vernon is an actual, thinking competent business man. Fast, but fun.
2/13/2018 c4 49Polydicta
Heh ... that was one FUN ride!

My only complaint is that Ron wasn't eaten by the thestrals.

Maybe next time ;)
2/13/2018 c4 t42n24t2
I tore through all four chapters! What a ride! You write the most interesting Snape and Potter relationships, and I do like seeing the Dursleys as a positive influence. Thank you!
2/13/2018 c1 ThePhoenixandtheDragon
Another perfect AU story. Any chance you will take back up a young Severus storyline and make him as sharp witted and tongued as this Harry?
2/13/2018 c4 weyrleader69
2/13/2018 c4 DebiO
Last chapter not quite as good as the preceding three, but not bad. Things just wrapped up to quickly. Dumbles died in prison, what happened to McGonagall? Love the idea of Lucius with a helicopter. Major complaint? the story is over. Thanks for writing a great tale. Now 4:00 AM, may get some sleep after all.
2/13/2018 c2 DebiO
No sleep tonight. Thankfully no work tomorrow, This is simply to good to put down.
2/13/2018 c1 DebiO
WOW! Just wow. One of the best AUs where Vernon is a good guy. A great intro.
2/13/2018 c4 Guest
Oh my I love this! Vernon sure turned the tables on Dumbles!
2/12/2018 c4 jadely31
So much for sleeping. I read this whole story in one sitting. Great humor, lots of imagination, I especially like the Room of Requirement renamed as the Hollideck. So much fun. Thanks for writing and sharing and happy endings (for most).
2/12/2018 c4 RainyDayReader
I really enjoyed this story - thanks so much for posting! You did a great job of creating an AU based on one change and the possible consequences of that change. I always enjoy a good story where Dumbledore's manipulations are exposed and he has to face the consequences. :)
2/12/2018 c4 reseh
I really enjoyed this story! Thanks so much for posting.
2/12/2018 c4 Hoppy159
Love the story. The ending kind of jarred me, it came to an end so quickly, but otherwise, I loved a smart Harry, who was prepared brilliantly by, of all people, Vernon! I loved how he brought everyone together who ordinarily would never have co-operated with one another. And it was excellently done, because Harry being taught how to not alienate potential allies, even if he personally disliked them, was not a hard concept to swallow at all. It worked for this story. Great job!

Someday, I'd love to read a story where someone explains to Dumbledore that having heard the prophecy, did not mean he had the obligation to steer how it would unfold. I mean, the prophecy didn't say something like "...the One with the power to vanquish the Dark lord will be led by the wise mentor how will ensure his victory...". Dumbledore's hubris was really overwhelming. He really is an unrepentant meddler.
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