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2/15/2018 c1 28Jet Engine
I like how uncomfortable Anti-Cosmo and Foop are, but Anti-Wanda's just...being Anti-Wanda.

This is a really cute not-so-little one-shot. Friendship Day is a neat idea for an Anti-Fairy holiday. Also, Anti-Cosmo totally flew right into that cherry stem thing. Oh, boy. XD
2/13/2018 c1 86Bookworm Gal
This was absolutely entertaining. From the fact that Anti-Cosmo pretty much poured all his emotions out to someone selling candy to the conversation between HP and Anti-Wanda about "air conditioning." Then there was the fact that HP pretty much toyed with Anti-Cosmo the entire day. I can definitely tell you had fun writing this. Nicely done.
2/13/2018 c1 21Ji'aska
This was an interesting 'short' story.
Being familiar with the world building of your other stories added a lot of context, but the story felt like it was mostly understandable without it.
I like how complex the relationship between the two characters is.
One thing I was curious about though, does Anti-Cosmo not get the subtext of ‘turning on the A/C’ or is he ignoring it because his child is present?

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