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9/3/2019 c1 3LdyJulanna
Okay this story was completely awesome. I just spent the last several hours binge reading this entire story. I cannot stop. I was so happy to find a tender fanfiction so in-depth all after all this time, especially one to ship to Jared and Ms. Parker, I absolutely loved all the elements he had in it. I will admit that there are a few times where I was a little confused between certain events. There were moments where I was like lost in translation a little bit but managed to figure out what was going on and then there were some moments where I was just like what the Fuck because yeah, not because it was a bad thing but just because damn like the whole test. There was so much action and so much use of all the characters and I especially love the way you explored the fact that maybe Jared wasn't the only one subjected to the centers mental Bullshit. I'm definitely adding this one to my favors for Pretender fanfiction's. I've always been a fan of Pretender since the first aired myself being a big conspiracy theorist and also having a soft spot for tormented bad boys sort of or in Jared's case, the tormented hero complex. I just loved the whole just desserts concept of Pretender and the dynamic between Jared and Ms. Parker. I was greatly saddened when they didn't ever truly get their moment together before the show ended. Thank you for this incredibly enjoyable and entertaining fanfiction-LdyJulanna
8/24/2019 c1 Excelsior75
Love the new covers for pretender stories!
6/3/2019 c62 Guest
wow i spent most of this story going wtf. so confusing twist and turns everywhere which is such the pretender way. you didn't get lost in the rabbit hole either and finished the story. great job I'd love to read more stories from you
4/21/2019 c62 Nans
What a great ending for a delightful novel.
Loved all the twists and turns.
Hope that we might see a follow up tale of how the children develop, grin.
2/14/2019 c62 Debea
Thank you for your story, I enjoyed reading it. Loved how you used every person from the series. Hopefully the "scrolls" are dead!
Thanks again .
8/26/2018 c56 Debra L. Trembath
Love your story. Hope you finish it. I have found that a lot of fan fiction authors don't finish. Thanks for a great ending to the Pretender story.
8/9/2018 c56 Guest
Keeps getting better. I can't wait until the next chapters .
8/8/2018 c55 NYT
Wow, what an imagination you have! Things aren't looking good though. :(
6/26/2018 c51 Debra L. Trembath
Love the story so far. Hope you finish it. A lot of the stories I start never get finished.
5/18/2018 c51 Debra
Great story , you are a very talented story teller.I really look forward to your updates ...the plot thickens!
Thanks for writing.
4/26/2018 c46 Debra
Love this story. You really are a very good writer. A new twist, in a lot of chapters. I look forward to your posts. Thanks.
4/15/2018 c41 Klover Parker
This is amazing! I'm addicted! I can't wait for an update!
4/11/2018 c41 Guest
Excellent read. I've been away from ff for years. Keep up the good work!
3/22/2018 c26 Debra
I love this story. It's a great read, with long chapters. I look forward to your updates. Thanks for writing.
2/26/2018 c8 Nans
Great story. Just read through all the chapters.
Everyone sounded as they were on the series.
Hope you will continue with this story line.
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