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Discovered this platform called Storio (storioai dot com) recently. You can convert your stories into interactive games with character art and reader choices. I’m testing it with some of my older stories right now.
Discovered this platform called Storio (storioai dot com) recently. You can convert your stories into interactive games with character art and reader choices. I’m testing it with some of my older stories right now.
4/16 c37 Guest
Love your story so much! Not a single critique, I’m just greedy so I want more quickly lol. Thanks for writing!
Love your story so much! Not a single critique, I’m just greedy so I want more quickly lol. Thanks for writing!
3/20 c37 Arguro
uughh... all the plots are so needlessly complicated. I fairly enjoyed reading the story to this point but it would be good that Ginny and Harry evolve into something a little more intelligent than an oyster for a change.
Frankly since the beginning as a ready i really needed to make some mental gymnastic to perceive their decisions as believable.
All this Petigrew problem should already have been resolved in my opinon. Harry is a fucking auror and have access to the cape of invisibility, he know about investigations and criminal mindset, so gunning for peter shouldn't be as complicated as depicted here.
uughh... all the plots are so needlessly complicated. I fairly enjoyed reading the story to this point but it would be good that Ginny and Harry evolve into something a little more intelligent than an oyster for a change.
Frankly since the beginning as a ready i really needed to make some mental gymnastic to perceive their decisions as believable.
All this Petigrew problem should already have been resolved in my opinon. Harry is a fucking auror and have access to the cape of invisibility, he know about investigations and criminal mindset, so gunning for peter shouldn't be as complicated as depicted here.
3/11 c7 Guest
Ok, so, I like this story. It seems good. But accents are REALLY hard to write without distracting the reader. Best bet is to avoid accenting dialogue in the first place. Other than that, I’m enjoying your work.
Ok, so, I like this story. It seems good. But accents are REALLY hard to write without distracting the reader. Best bet is to avoid accenting dialogue in the first place. Other than that, I’m enjoying your work.
1/22 c37 DHTVAtlantis16
Heyy
It's my first time reading this fic and i have a question
How long does it usually take to post a new chapter?
Great story by the way
Heyy
It's my first time reading this fic and i have a question
How long does it usually take to post a new chapter?
Great story by the way
1/18 c37 Alwin-nl
I don’t think there’s a problem temporarily switching pov, especially when something important needs to happen. I’ve seen someone switch to present time and a “mental voice” for the character and it worked well.
Anyway, interesting read so far, following, and hoping it won’t take another six years for you to finish this story.
I don’t think there’s a problem temporarily switching pov, especially when something important needs to happen. I’ve seen someone switch to present time and a “mental voice” for the character and it worked well.
Anyway, interesting read so far, following, and hoping it won’t take another six years for you to finish this story.
1/15 c25 Alwin-nl
One of the most stupid and annoying things from canon is that daily prophet galleon draw.
Because sure, what people who constantly struggle for money would do when they get 700 galleons is spend it all in one go on something they absolutely don’t need, like an expensive vacation.
I still can’t believe jkr wrote that when she was living off of social security.
One of the most stupid and annoying things from canon is that daily prophet galleon draw.
Because sure, what people who constantly struggle for money would do when they get 700 galleons is spend it all in one go on something they absolutely don’t need, like an expensive vacation.
I still can’t believe jkr wrote that when she was living off of social security.
1/14 c4 Alwin-nl
You might say you have complete control over what happens but my experience is that a storyline can run away from you without planning, changing it and the story both…
Interesting read so far, and well beta-d (or spell checked), thanks for that! It’s a pleasure to read.
You might say you have complete control over what happens but my experience is that a storyline can run away from you without planning, changing it and the story both…
Interesting read so far, and well beta-d (or spell checked), thanks for that! It’s a pleasure to read.
1/5 c37 Guest
It’s the new year, can we please get a new chapter? I love reading this on the train to work, it’s my favorite part of the day.
It’s the new year, can we please get a new chapter? I love reading this on the train to work, it’s my favorite part of the day.
12/7/2024 c37 Guest
MA’AM your story is too good the people need an update!
MA’AM your story is too good the people need an update!
12/4/2024 c37 
1TheWateringWizard
Loved it ! Harry using his decades old mental maturity learned from Hermione against her is hilarious and brilliant !
Their plan of asking Remus about his non-appearance on the map is great !
1TheWateringWizardLoved it ! Harry using his decades old mental maturity learned from Hermione against her is hilarious and brilliant !
Their plan of asking Remus about his non-appearance on the map is great !
12/2/2024 c37 Tobias
I Really like this fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I Really like this fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapter!
11/30/2024 c37 Guest
Amazing chapter! The natural twists and organic reactions of the characters are amazing to see in your stories! Please, at least one more chapter before you ghost us for another year? Ç.Ç
Amazing chapter! The natural twists and organic reactions of the characters are amazing to see in your stories! Please, at least one more chapter before you ghost us for another year? Ç.Ç