for Breaching Normality4/16/2020 c13 Guest
UPDATE
UPDATE
4/16/2020 c12 Guest
C'mon dude! Time to update, we're all waiting!
:3
C'mon dude! Time to update, we're all waiting!
:3
4/8/2020 c7 Guest
Please update will you?
Or at least tell us why you aren't doing it.
Please update will you?
Or at least tell us why you aren't doing it.
4/5/2020 c13 Guest
Please Update!
Please Update!
4/5/2020 c13 Guest
Update!
Update!
3/15/2020 c13 
2MesoMaxi
It was awhile since you updated but wow, this is just such a cool and impressive story! I really like all the characters and their interactions. I hope you get the motivation to continue!
2MesoMaxiIt was awhile since you updated but wow, this is just such a cool and impressive story! I really like all the characters and their interactions. I hope you get the motivation to continue!
8/18/2019 c13 That Speedhunter
So, he’s Zero right now. That means he’ll be Infinite later. Can’t wait to see how you write his whole name change.
Anyway, another great chapter to one heck of a saga. When you eventually finish this story, it’s gonna be a sad day. Imma get Endgame flashbacks when it happens. But until then, keep up the great work. This is a story worth rereading from end to end again at least once.
*magic wardrobe change into a fancy suit*
I GUARANTEE IT!**
L8r!
**this statement by the reviewer in this fan fiction review is not an official guarantee by said reviewer and the aforementioned statement in should not be treated as such as it is not an actual guarantee
So, he’s Zero right now. That means he’ll be Infinite later. Can’t wait to see how you write his whole name change.
Anyway, another great chapter to one heck of a saga. When you eventually finish this story, it’s gonna be a sad day. Imma get Endgame flashbacks when it happens. But until then, keep up the great work. This is a story worth rereading from end to end again at least once.
*magic wardrobe change into a fancy suit*
I GUARANTEE IT!**
L8r!
**this statement by the reviewer in this fan fiction review is not an official guarantee by said reviewer and the aforementioned statement in should not be treated as such as it is not an actual guarantee
8/18/2019 c13 59Tirainy
Finally, got around to catching up on this story! And, whoa, stuff is getting intense. I'm starting to suspect we'll have a league of villains forming pretty soon? *wink wink nudge nudge*
59TirainyFinally, got around to catching up on this story! And, whoa, stuff is getting intense. I'm starting to suspect we'll have a league of villains forming pretty soon? *wink wink nudge nudge*
7/24/2019 c13 123robot
Haven't reviewed in a very long time, but of course I've kept up with the story every step of the way! I dunno how I'm gonna summarise the numerous shocking developments into one review but I'll give it a go. :P Suppose that's the big thing really - pretty much every chapter has had something crazy or unexpected or intriguing happen so it keeps you hooked very easily, along with the investment we've already built up with these characters of course. Never a dull moment!
The "weird emerald", as we're calling it, definitely presents one of the most interesting dynamics, especially finding out the ways in which it affects different people, plus it gives a particular goal to be worked towards. Talking the latest chapter in particular, I was honestly shocked it actually returned Rosy's hearing again (too used to cruel surprises!) and even MORE surprised it actually gave Mephy a voice - never thought I'd see the day! But that's what makes it so interesting. Oh, and Rosy's fake Boom was brilliant. :D
Pretty unexpected aspect of this part of the trilogy has been the introduction of so many Forces elements (the Emerald included). I wasn't sure about their inclusion but have certainly been more than interested to see where they go, and it seems it's at least partially leading to bringing Sabo back into things. I did think his absence was odd considering his importance in the other two parts so I guess this explains it. :P Honestly though I'm genuinely worried for everyone if he does come into play again...the people who wanted him dead from the start won't be happy, that's for sure. I'm both parts interested and heavily concerned to see how he factors in. :P
Oh yeah, you did an incredibly good job in conveying the tension in the scene between Gadget and Infinite - I could definitely feel how tense it was! But yeah, I guess this part is shaping up to be one of the intense yet with the potential villain line-up we have here. I am definitely worried about Mephy though - hopefully we don't end up losing his nice side for good, but only time will tell...
I guess that's all I really wanted to say - with your mention of how you struggled with the latest chapter, I'd like to provide encouragement where I can, so keep it up!
Haven't reviewed in a very long time, but of course I've kept up with the story every step of the way! I dunno how I'm gonna summarise the numerous shocking developments into one review but I'll give it a go. :P Suppose that's the big thing really - pretty much every chapter has had something crazy or unexpected or intriguing happen so it keeps you hooked very easily, along with the investment we've already built up with these characters of course. Never a dull moment!
The "weird emerald", as we're calling it, definitely presents one of the most interesting dynamics, especially finding out the ways in which it affects different people, plus it gives a particular goal to be worked towards. Talking the latest chapter in particular, I was honestly shocked it actually returned Rosy's hearing again (too used to cruel surprises!) and even MORE surprised it actually gave Mephy a voice - never thought I'd see the day! But that's what makes it so interesting. Oh, and Rosy's fake Boom was brilliant. :D
Pretty unexpected aspect of this part of the trilogy has been the introduction of so many Forces elements (the Emerald included). I wasn't sure about their inclusion but have certainly been more than interested to see where they go, and it seems it's at least partially leading to bringing Sabo back into things. I did think his absence was odd considering his importance in the other two parts so I guess this explains it. :P Honestly though I'm genuinely worried for everyone if he does come into play again...the people who wanted him dead from the start won't be happy, that's for sure. I'm both parts interested and heavily concerned to see how he factors in. :P
Oh yeah, you did an incredibly good job in conveying the tension in the scene between Gadget and Infinite - I could definitely feel how tense it was! But yeah, I guess this part is shaping up to be one of the intense yet with the potential villain line-up we have here. I am definitely worried about Mephy though - hopefully we don't end up losing his nice side for good, but only time will tell...
I guess that's all I really wanted to say - with your mention of how you struggled with the latest chapter, I'd like to provide encouragement where I can, so keep it up!
7/15/2019 c13 14king.needlemouse
aaaa there's a Lot happening between mephiles and infinite and i'm SO excited to see where this is going :)!
14king.needlemouseaaaa there's a Lot happening between mephiles and infinite and i'm SO excited to see where this is going :)!
7/11/2019 c12 ShadAmy1Fan - Shylah McVey
Hmmmmmm. HMMMMMMM. I wonder P this plot is definitely moving forward very mysteriously! I like it! I hope you’re doing well ) keep up the good work!
Hmmmmmm. HMMMMMMM. I wonder P this plot is definitely moving forward very mysteriously! I like it! I hope you’re doing well ) keep up the good work!
7/10/2019 c13 ShadAmy1Fan - Shylah McVey
Oof. OOF. So. Much. This was an AMAZING chapter.
Also...espio’s resolve *crumbles* - as in cookie crumbles...? Eh? Eh? I’m really tired.
Recently I haven’t left some great reviews. But seriously this chapter was one of the best yet. Congrats! Keep up the amazing work! I loved the scene with rosy making the duplicate lol and Eggman. And zero. And gadget. And basically just all of it. You are such an amazing story writer. I hope you’re doing well!
Oof. OOF. So. Much. This was an AMAZING chapter.
Also...espio’s resolve *crumbles* - as in cookie crumbles...? Eh? Eh? I’m really tired.
Recently I haven’t left some great reviews. But seriously this chapter was one of the best yet. Congrats! Keep up the amazing work! I loved the scene with rosy making the duplicate lol and Eggman. And zero. And gadget. And basically just all of it. You are such an amazing story writer. I hope you’re doing well!
7/10/2019 c13 2JustusPariah
Oh, how I've been waiting for this. This chapter was perfect in building the tension for the remainder of the story, and that ending was the chili on a turkey frank hot dog! I'm excited to see Gadget join Team Sonic, the reintroduction of the evil Mephiles, and possibly the team-up of the worst of Sonic's adversaries. This story keeps on giving, so please keep up the great work.
2JustusPariahOh, how I've been waiting for this. This chapter was perfect in building the tension for the remainder of the story, and that ending was the chili on a turkey frank hot dog! I'm excited to see Gadget join Team Sonic, the reintroduction of the evil Mephiles, and possibly the team-up of the worst of Sonic's adversaries. This story keeps on giving, so please keep up the great work.