for Breaching Normality5/19/2019 c12 Guest
I just wanna say that I just love how you created Boom's, Grey's, Rosy's, Red's, and everyone else from the Alternate Reality. It's just how the characters act has gotten my attention on reading the Alternate Reality and reading it about 3 times now, going back to reading my favorite moments of that story as well as the other two as well. I love how you did Boom the most as well, despite him being a rude boi, he is one of my favorite characters in the Alternate Reality series. He is a mysterious character, and I love how he has sort of a like a mixed feelings? Like his personality and his actions got me interested in him, he doesn't like everyone yet he wants to protect them. I don't really know how to explain it? I just wanna say that I really do love the Alternate Reality series, you did a really good job and it also inspired me also to write actually. You are one of my favorite fanfic authors here in this site and I hope you have a wonderful day!
I just wanna say that I just love how you created Boom's, Grey's, Rosy's, Red's, and everyone else from the Alternate Reality. It's just how the characters act has gotten my attention on reading the Alternate Reality and reading it about 3 times now, going back to reading my favorite moments of that story as well as the other two as well. I love how you did Boom the most as well, despite him being a rude boi, he is one of my favorite characters in the Alternate Reality series. He is a mysterious character, and I love how he has sort of a like a mixed feelings? Like his personality and his actions got me interested in him, he doesn't like everyone yet he wants to protect them. I don't really know how to explain it? I just wanna say that I really do love the Alternate Reality series, you did a really good job and it also inspired me also to write actually. You are one of my favorite fanfic authors here in this site and I hope you have a wonderful day!
3/29/2019 c12 
14king.needlemouse
ohohoho ur so evil i love it
this was a super exciting chapter! loved the character interactions, loved the tension, loved the added mystery, as always. also hmmmmm i've got a sneaking suspicion that the white laser is the same as another certain laser an alternate version of mephiles happened to kill sonic with back in 2006... but maybe that's just me? lol
aaaaanyways great work as always pal ;)
14king.needlemouseohohoho ur so evil i love it
this was a super exciting chapter! loved the character interactions, loved the tension, loved the added mystery, as always. also hmmmmm i've got a sneaking suspicion that the white laser is the same as another certain laser an alternate version of mephiles happened to kill sonic with back in 2006... but maybe that's just me? lol
aaaaanyways great work as always pal ;)
3/28/2019 c12 K
T-That’s really wild, man.
T-That’s really wild, man.
3/27/2019 c12 5TsubasaKEI
Was mephy just turned into Mephiles for a moment? :0. And is that emerald actually the phantom ruby? Kinda make sense if it is, with the illusion and stuff. Btw, was so happy that i have a lots of notifications from your fic in one day!
5TsubasaKEIWas mephy just turned into Mephiles for a moment? :0. And is that emerald actually the phantom ruby? Kinda make sense if it is, with the illusion and stuff. Btw, was so happy that i have a lots of notifications from your fic in one day!
3/8/2019 c11 Caimsa138175
I'm loving this story (have just read from the the start of the first part to here in for days) . So looking towards top the future chapters. Really hoping boom can sort through his guilt and get back to that bond him and Murphy were on the cusp of before he died. And interested in how this story will play out with the phantom ruby's involvement.
I'm loving this story (have just read from the the start of the first part to here in for days) . So looking towards top the future chapters. Really hoping boom can sort through his guilt and get back to that bond him and Murphy were on the cusp of before he died. And interested in how this story will play out with the phantom ruby's involvement.
2/11/2019 c11 RK9 Mew2
Judging by the way the story is going, I'm going to take a shot in the dark (no pun intended) and say that the corrupted Chaos Emerald is the Phantom Ruby.
Judging by the way the story is going, I'm going to take a shot in the dark (no pun intended) and say that the corrupted Chaos Emerald is the Phantom Ruby.
1/11/2019 c11 14king.needlemouse
aaaaaah i'm so fuckin late but abjfwbfjsfj literally what even was this chapter why would u do this to me i just wanna hug everyone :( if you kill any of them i s2g
also? gadgets here? and uhh what's that now multi-colored eyes?
... i'm onto u
14king.needlemouseaaaaaah i'm so fuckin late but abjfwbfjsfj literally what even was this chapter why would u do this to me i just wanna hug everyone :( if you kill any of them i s2g
also? gadgets here? and uhh what's that now multi-colored eyes?
... i'm onto u
1/4/2019 c1 4NervousWreck96
(not really a review, but a reply to "Supreme Void" so others can see)
Kindly fuck off and don't come back.
4NervousWreck96(not really a review, but a reply to "Supreme Void" so others can see)
Kindly fuck off and don't come back.
1/4/2019 c11 1Supreme Void
Your story is absolutely dogshit, I hope you kill yourself, so we don't have to look and read this cringe ass shit ever again. FUCKING Sonic fan.
1Supreme VoidYour story is absolutely dogshit, I hope you kill yourself, so we don't have to look and read this cringe ass shit ever again. FUCKING Sonic fan.
1/3/2019 c11 5TsubasaKEI
WHO IS MEPHY AND PENUMBRA FACING? Damnn why can’t i remember what characters have different eye color :(( And it’s so nice to see Gadget in here with Infinite as his family ? :0 can’t wait to see that unravel.
Ah.. love to see worried24/7forMephybutDon’tWantToAcknowledgeit!Boom in action :)
I was wondering (and also kinda forgets) what kind of clothing their counter part are wearing? Do they wear the same thing as the original? Cause i kept imagining Boom wearing Scourge outfit but can’t remember if that’s how you describe him?
Anyway, love the update!
5TsubasaKEIWHO IS MEPHY AND PENUMBRA FACING? Damnn why can’t i remember what characters have different eye color :(( And it’s so nice to see Gadget in here with Infinite as his family ? :0 can’t wait to see that unravel.
Ah.. love to see worried24/7forMephybutDon’tWantToAcknowledgeit!Boom in action :)
I was wondering (and also kinda forgets) what kind of clothing their counter part are wearing? Do they wear the same thing as the original? Cause i kept imagining Boom wearing Scourge outfit but can’t remember if that’s how you describe him?
Anyway, love the update!
1/3/2019 c11 ShadAmy1Fan - Shylah McVey
Awwwwww oh boy! This was really fun to read. That phantom ruby just adds a whole new perspective and it’s awesome. And I love how you added infinite and gadget. This just keeps getting better and better (sorry if I’ve said that multiple reviews in a row XD it’s only the truth tho ) keep it up!
Awwwwww oh boy! This was really fun to read. That phantom ruby just adds a whole new perspective and it’s awesome. And I love how you added infinite and gadget. This just keeps getting better and better (sorry if I’ve said that multiple reviews in a row XD it’s only the truth tho ) keep it up!
11/23/2018 c1 9Zoggerific
Sorry if I've been a little late with the bandwagon, but here's my feedback for the opening chapter.
Your opening is frankly excellent in the sense that you compact plenty of information together in a very short span of time. For instance: you mention Espio's one-eyed disability, his battle-sustained injuries and you use the sun's rays to illustrate this meaningfully.
The interactions between Rosy and Espio are really cute and having not fully caught up on the series I'm more than a little perturbed by the prospect of normally villainous characters like Memphiles and Rosie (Archie Comics) all getting along under the same roof as the heroes.
My only complaint is the term 'amber orb' which I take to mean the glow of the morning sun and would prefer if it were explicitly stated as such.
Suffice to say, I'll be interested in reading more and following this fantastic story.
9ZoggerificSorry if I've been a little late with the bandwagon, but here's my feedback for the opening chapter.
Your opening is frankly excellent in the sense that you compact plenty of information together in a very short span of time. For instance: you mention Espio's one-eyed disability, his battle-sustained injuries and you use the sun's rays to illustrate this meaningfully.
The interactions between Rosy and Espio are really cute and having not fully caught up on the series I'm more than a little perturbed by the prospect of normally villainous characters like Memphiles and Rosie (Archie Comics) all getting along under the same roof as the heroes.
My only complaint is the term 'amber orb' which I take to mean the glow of the morning sun and would prefer if it were explicitly stated as such.
Suffice to say, I'll be interested in reading more and following this fantastic story.