
1/19 c12 Guest
Why does he call voldemort, voldemorte
Why does he call voldemort, voldemorte
1/11 c125 AngelAlexG
I really liked this story but I really don't understand why I added so many OCs in relation with Harry but not added Hermione.
I really liked this story but I really don't understand why I added so many OCs in relation with Harry but not added Hermione.
1/9 c83 Takemikazuchi25
I've really enjoyed the story so far, up until now. Nobody cares about this Peter prewette that you're trying to make into a second main character. It seems as if you were running out of plot ideas and decided to go all over the place with mini main characters.
I've really enjoyed the story so far, up until now. Nobody cares about this Peter prewette that you're trying to make into a second main character. It seems as if you were running out of plot ideas and decided to go all over the place with mini main characters.
1/7 c93 Redhorseman25
Great story. Probably the best ive ever read up untill it started following peter prewett as much as harry potter. I lost interest after that. Your story your choices but it appears your making him into another main character and to be honest no one cares about a prewett
Great story. Probably the best ive ever read up untill it started following peter prewett as much as harry potter. I lost interest after that. Your story your choices but it appears your making him into another main character and to be honest no one cares about a prewett
12/17/2020 c5 stylo1
casting oaths not swearing them.
bellatrix apparating to grimwauld a place under the fidelius
sirius making harry his heir which for some reason makes him of age.
chapter no longer then 2k
yeah this is quite the trashy story
casting oaths not swearing them.
bellatrix apparating to grimwauld a place under the fidelius
sirius making harry his heir which for some reason makes him of age.
chapter no longer then 2k
yeah this is quite the trashy story
11/28/2020 c146 SleepIsMeantToBeOverdosed
Poor little Albus. I actually expected he'd be in a mental hospital in a straight jacket rocking back and forth in a padded room trapped in a living dream rather than a nursing home.
Poor little Albus. I actually expected he'd be in a mental hospital in a straight jacket rocking back and forth in a padded room trapped in a living dream rather than a nursing home.
11/4/2020 c146 Caliban03
"Long" and nice story
I appreciated the parts with dreams and some reactions from their gardian angels as well
Thank you for sharing
"Long" and nice story
I appreciated the parts with dreams and some reactions from their gardian angels as well
Thank you for sharing
10/29/2020 c146 jimmy.oz
That was a great story. only suggestion would be to have a lemon for each of the wives but it wasn't really needed. just because of how the story is would be nice.
That was a great story. only suggestion would be to have a lemon for each of the wives but it wasn't really needed. just because of how the story is would be nice.