2/25/2018 c1 Nalu Nalu Nalu
Awesome chapter
Awesome chapter
2/22/2018 c1 6The Captain Carrot
A very interesting concept! The whole premise of a corrupt/evil adult with a child protagonist really reminded me of the Magician's Nephew, and that's what pulled me in. Keep it up!
A very interesting concept! The whole premise of a corrupt/evil adult with a child protagonist really reminded me of the Magician's Nephew, and that's what pulled me in. Keep it up!
2/21/2018 c1 UNNES1000
This story is good so far. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing chapter 2 as soon as you post it!
This story is good so far. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing chapter 2 as soon as you post it!