for The Jokes on the Pixie1/5/2021 c2 lazygirl89
Interesting, Jasper's a dick though for choosing Alice over Ness. I truly hope that Bella's true mate isn't Jake, that would be too obvious and boring to be honest, I hoping that it will be either Paul, Jared or Embry that is her true mate.
Interesting, Jasper's a dick though for choosing Alice over Ness. I truly hope that Bella's true mate isn't Jake, that would be too obvious and boring to be honest, I hoping that it will be either Paul, Jared or Embry that is her true mate.
8/19/2020 c2 binkleys23
I hope u do . I cant wait to see what they do to the Cullens. keep up the good work and update more when you have the time to get to . cant wait to see what happens next.
I hope u do . I cant wait to see what they do to the Cullens. keep up the good work and update more when you have the time to get to . cant wait to see what happens next.
1/25/2020 c2 KellysGirl
This story is off to an amazing start. i really hope you finish it. The haters don't have to read it if they don't like the plot. Most fanfiction stories have their own plot. Keep up the great writing!
This story is off to an amazing start. i really hope you finish it. The haters don't have to read it if they don't like the plot. Most fanfiction stories have their own plot. Keep up the great writing!
10/17/2019 c2 Jmah0ca
I can wait to see her make Jasper beg! She should hand Alice and Edward their ass!
Great story! I hope it hasn’t been drip
I can wait to see her make Jasper beg! She should hand Alice and Edward their ass!
Great story! I hope it hasn’t been drip
7/23/2019 c2 
1Chloeebeee
This is everything. The thought of her having a relationship with the wolf pack is awesome.
1ChloeebeeeThis is everything. The thought of her having a relationship with the wolf pack is awesome.
5/20/2019 c2 Bubblyy
I love the plot! I love this point of view! Who cares if some haters don’t like the plot. That’s what makes a good story, and makes it creative. If it follows the plot I might as well read/watch twilight again lol I hate those stories that happen according to the plot it’s boring n I know what happens.
I can’t wait to find out what happens next! I can’t wait to see how she interacts with the wolf’s and volturi. This is gold, much love
I love the plot! I love this point of view! Who cares if some haters don’t like the plot. That’s what makes a good story, and makes it creative. If it follows the plot I might as well read/watch twilight again lol I hate those stories that happen according to the plot it’s boring n I know what happens.
I can’t wait to find out what happens next! I can’t wait to see how she interacts with the wolf’s and volturi. This is gold, much love
4/30/2019 c2 4Gracie04
Great story! I love your Ness character it's unique and refreshing. Bella was at such a disadvantage under Edwards thrall and constant surveillance. So glad she woke up;) I would love for Jake to be Bella's mate! (Pretty please). Can't wait to see what happens next!
p.s. In response to the guest reviewer saying the plot had been changed and Twilight fans do not like it is preposterous. You are correct that's why there's a Fanfiction website to write your story as you want it. We love to read them too!
Great story! I love your Ness character it's unique and refreshing. Bella was at such a disadvantage under Edwards thrall and constant surveillance. So glad she woke up;) I would love for Jake to be Bella's mate! (Pretty please). Can't wait to see what happens next!
p.s. In response to the guest reviewer saying the plot had been changed and Twilight fans do not like it is preposterous. You are correct that's why there's a Fanfiction website to write your story as you want it. We love to read them too!