for The Great Diferences: Gods of Gravity Falls10/21/2018 c2 
46Master of the Boot
I gotta say this story has a serious sense of scope and scale. the intimacy of Gravity falls and the grand scope of Warhammer fit well together
it works out well and I'm going to enjoy the hell out of this
46Master of the BootI gotta say this story has a serious sense of scope and scale. the intimacy of Gravity falls and the grand scope of Warhammer fit well together
it works out well and I'm going to enjoy the hell out of this
10/21/2018 c1 Master of the Boot
Well this is crazy as hell, but I'm a sucker for big, crazy crossovers. So let's dive head first and see where this goes!
Well this is crazy as hell, but I'm a sucker for big, crazy crossovers. So let's dive head first and see where this goes!
10/5/2018 c4 774The Cowardly Christian
Interesting chapter but a lot of the sentences are still a bit fractured and hard to read, still you have me clamoring for more!
774The Cowardly ChristianInteresting chapter but a lot of the sentences are still a bit fractured and hard to read, still you have me clamoring for more!
4/5/2018 c3 nightmaster000
This is certainly a interesting idea and I look forward to seeing where this goes.
This is certainly a interesting idea and I look forward to seeing where this goes.
3/20/2018 c3 774The Cowardly Christian
...not quite sure I understood what happened here...but I love a good cosmic horror story, so it's all good.
Just so you know 'RasenganFin' and 'the Howling Behemoth' have already submitted stories before you so I have to pay their updates first.
Please list which three stories you want and I'll get to them as soon as possible.
774The Cowardly Christian...not quite sure I understood what happened here...but I love a good cosmic horror story, so it's all good.
Just so you know 'RasenganFin' and 'the Howling Behemoth' have already submitted stories before you so I have to pay their updates first.
Please list which three stories you want and I'll get to them as soon as possible.
3/3/2018 c2 71MA7
This chapter is extremely well written, you seem to have fixed most of the translation problems that happened in chapter 1. I am not familiar with gravity falls as I can't read the language it is written in, but I am very curious about it. I feel sorry for the Emperor in this chapter, it can't be fun being stuck in a chair for ten thousand years. You capture the grim darkness of 40k very well
71MA7This chapter is extremely well written, you seem to have fixed most of the translation problems that happened in chapter 1. I am not familiar with gravity falls as I can't read the language it is written in, but I am very curious about it. I feel sorry for the Emperor in this chapter, it can't be fun being stuck in a chair for ten thousand years. You capture the grim darkness of 40k very well
3/3/2018 c1 MA7
It's a shame that I can only leave one review per chapter. I would start by saying that I know that you had some issues with translating this story to English. The only problems I have with chapter one is issues related to the translation, stuff like the correct grammar for English, little things like gender nouns that make it hard to follow. I had to reread it a few times to understand what you were trying to say, but just because of the translation issues.
On the whole I like chapter 1. I like all the references to other fandoms, though I only knew a few of the fandoms you alluded to. I got the idea of some Necron star god crossed with Tzeentch in your description of the god observing all the various fandoms. I think that the description of the chaos gods were a bit too overly negative, but that's just because I am a chaos author lol. Personally I blame the imbeciles who took over the Games Workshop for basically destroying Warhammer Fantasy in the books, and I blame Matt Ward and a few other clowns for completely ruining 40k in recent years. May Nurgle pox the entire board of directors of Games Workshop for letting Matt Ward and other monsters loose in the cannon fluff! Lol.
I'm very interested to see what happens in chapter 2 and I hope you like my review :)
It's a shame that I can only leave one review per chapter. I would start by saying that I know that you had some issues with translating this story to English. The only problems I have with chapter one is issues related to the translation, stuff like the correct grammar for English, little things like gender nouns that make it hard to follow. I had to reread it a few times to understand what you were trying to say, but just because of the translation issues.
On the whole I like chapter 1. I like all the references to other fandoms, though I only knew a few of the fandoms you alluded to. I got the idea of some Necron star god crossed with Tzeentch in your description of the god observing all the various fandoms. I think that the description of the chaos gods were a bit too overly negative, but that's just because I am a chaos author lol. Personally I blame the imbeciles who took over the Games Workshop for basically destroying Warhammer Fantasy in the books, and I blame Matt Ward and a few other clowns for completely ruining 40k in recent years. May Nurgle pox the entire board of directors of Games Workshop for letting Matt Ward and other monsters loose in the cannon fluff! Lol.
I'm very interested to see what happens in chapter 2 and I hope you like my review :)
2/25/2018 c2 24Banghg
Todavía soy un principiante en el mundo de Warhammer, pero por lo que veo las cosas van bien. Las pesadillas de Dipper son algo más que pesadillas, y me pregunto si Mabel pasará por lo mismo, el que sea su hermana gemela me hace preguntarme si ella podría tenerlas de un modo diferente, ¿algo más caótico? Ya veremos, en cualquier caso el fic me interesa.
Lo que ocurrió en el bosque me trae algunas preguntas. Por la actitud calmada de la pelirroja (¿Wendy?), creo que no fue victima de ningún abuso, tomando en cuenta que ya parecía haber pasado por lo mismo antes. Cualquiera que haya sido abusado en esa situación ya estaría más que traumado
24BanghgTodavía soy un principiante en el mundo de Warhammer, pero por lo que veo las cosas van bien. Las pesadillas de Dipper son algo más que pesadillas, y me pregunto si Mabel pasará por lo mismo, el que sea su hermana gemela me hace preguntarme si ella podría tenerlas de un modo diferente, ¿algo más caótico? Ya veremos, en cualquier caso el fic me interesa.
Lo que ocurrió en el bosque me trae algunas preguntas. Por la actitud calmada de la pelirroja (¿Wendy?), creo que no fue victima de ningún abuso, tomando en cuenta que ya parecía haber pasado por lo mismo antes. Cualquiera que haya sido abusado en esa situación ya estaría más que traumado
2/25/2018 c1 Banghg
Fue un gran inicio, me gusto el modo en que pasaste de mundo en mundo y señalándolos, creo que algunos de ellos no los conocía, y realmente son interesante.
Tu forma de describirlos fue bastante exacta y va bien con tu narración.
Ahora todo va a empezar, y ya quiero ver como Dipper y Mabel se las arreglan para lo que se viene. Lo cierto es que e leído muy pocos crossovers con Gravity Falls y Warhammer, la mayoría no puede mesclar bien los mundos y optan por el que tiene la mecánica más sencilla y lineal para narrarlo.
Estaré viendo como sigue.
Fue un gran inicio, me gusto el modo en que pasaste de mundo en mundo y señalándolos, creo que algunos de ellos no los conocía, y realmente son interesante.
Tu forma de describirlos fue bastante exacta y va bien con tu narración.
Ahora todo va a empezar, y ya quiero ver como Dipper y Mabel se las arreglan para lo que se viene. Lo cierto es que e leído muy pocos crossovers con Gravity Falls y Warhammer, la mayoría no puede mesclar bien los mundos y optan por el que tiene la mecánica más sencilla y lineal para narrarlo.
Estaré viendo como sigue.
2/22/2018 c2 774The Cowardly Christian
Aw, I see what your doing now...very good.
...but the last chapter...dose that mean your bringing the loud house and Steven Universe into this?
Also, great chapter!
774The Cowardly ChristianAw, I see what your doing now...very good.
...but the last chapter...dose that mean your bringing the loud house and Steven Universe into this?
Also, great chapter!
2/22/2018 c1 The Cowardly Christian
Wow...I couldn't have bashed the status quo better if I tried...I love this!
Wow...I couldn't have bashed the status quo better if I tried...I love this!