for Harry Potter Orphan (Jim Black Rashard)5/18/2024 c1 hdres
An interesting and well written story. I enjoyed the complete disruption of the Harry Potter timeline and the avoidance of Hogwarts. Thank you for sharing your story
An interesting and well written story. I enjoyed the complete disruption of the Harry Potter timeline and the avoidance of Hogwarts. Thank you for sharing your story
9/20/2023 c1 RightnWrong
This was fairly interesting. I didn’t love Hermione not actually DOING anything beyond “getting naked and showering to comfort a traumatized Harry” but I understand some stories emphasize something or other, so it’s all good.
Thanks for writing ,
This was fairly interesting. I didn’t love Hermione not actually DOING anything beyond “getting naked and showering to comfort a traumatized Harry” but I understand some stories emphasize something or other, so it’s all good.
Thanks for writing ,
6/18/2023 c1 
5plums
My first impression was that Hermione was very whiny throughout this.
You also had an instance of Dumbledore just randomly calling him “mr Potter” during the third task.
5plumsMy first impression was that Hermione was very whiny throughout this.
You also had an instance of Dumbledore just randomly calling him “mr Potter” during the third task.
12/20/2022 c1 Guest
Great story. Very di8fferent, but interesting none the less
Great story. Very di8fferent, but interesting none the less
10/28/2022 c1 2Specky Clarke
A really great story. Loved it. Your punctuation and spelling makes reading more difficult and needs to be worked on.
2Specky ClarkeA really great story. Loved it. Your punctuation and spelling makes reading more difficult and needs to be worked on.
9/12/2022 c1 Guest
Awww, so sad that Sirius Black somehow managed to die twice in this story. Some assholes just really hate him, don't yo...they?
Ah, you sound quite proud of your lack of education in the English language and punctuation. Good...for you? Oh hey, I can play, with punc, tuati, on too! Weee!
Lol, you sound like someone I'd love to have a beer with!
Well, other than a very strongly worded cussin' for killing off Sirius for no damn good reason (and neglecting Hedwig...) this is a fantastic story!
But...did Harry or Hermione either one ever claim their vaults?
Awww, so sad that Sirius Black somehow managed to die twice in this story. Some assholes just really hate him, don't yo...they?
Ah, you sound quite proud of your lack of education in the English language and punctuation. Good...for you? Oh hey, I can play, with punc, tuati, on too! Weee!
Lol, you sound like someone I'd love to have a beer with!
Well, other than a very strongly worded cussin' for killing off Sirius for no damn good reason (and neglecting Hedwig...) this is a fantastic story!
But...did Harry or Hermione either one ever claim their vaults?
8/21/2022 c1 2shadewatcher
Muwahahahahahahahaa! Love it! Though I thought it strange that the Grangers and Rashards started calling Jim by the name Harry halfway through the story. F he'd been Jim since he was five and they only learned about Harry when they learned about magic, but were also trying to hide his original identity, why would they call him Harry at all? Just wondering.
2shadewatcherMuwahahahahahahahaa! Love it! Though I thought it strange that the Grangers and Rashards started calling Jim by the name Harry halfway through the story. F he'd been Jim since he was five and they only learned about Harry when they learned about magic, but were also trying to hide his original identity, why would they call him Harry at all? Just wondering.
4/18/2022 c1 odonnellzoo99
Great story. I’m not sure how I missed it after reading RAF a few years back. Maybe it was longer ago than I thought and you hadn’t published this yet. Anyway…
Thank you for sharing your creativity.
Great story. I’m not sure how I missed it after reading RAF a few years back. Maybe it was longer ago than I thought and you hadn’t published this yet. Anyway…
Thank you for sharing your creativity.